This is literally the first time i've ever commented anything on this site (and i was planning on never doing so) but honestly, i have to give my thoughts on this. You got mad potential. The gameplay is simple enough where you don't feel overwhelmed, you get sexual content quick enough to not get bored, and the humour in between is just great. You really nailed everything this kind of game needs (i particularly enjoy Kawakami's character here, can't wait till she is added as a route). I genuinely have very little gripes other than a few punctuation errors, but for real, i hope you manage to put your ideas into a reality with this game, but please remember to take breaks when needed.