That's fair. Keep in mind that Chris and Alex are barely out of their teenage years. In the scene in question, Chris is horny beyond belief and Alex is coming to terms with her sexuality without the benefit of any past experience. Alex has never masturbated, and here is the second time she's discovered Chris getting herself some. A lot of this is addressed in chapter 4 (coming soon to a retailer near you!) Hilarity ensues.A bit of a nitpick?.. nah, probably a reasonable issue.
So I've been enjoying how this story goes pretty much. It might need another pass in the future, but is overall fine. Until I got to the second Chris's masturbation scene, where Alex joins in. I just can't suspend my disbelief anymore: Alex sees Chris in this low light setting, meaning she knows that if Chris sees her, she will realize Alex is awake unless Alex stays stationary. And Alex even sees Chris looking. So when Alex turned on her back my immersion broke completely. And I wish I had any idea how to salvage this scene, but I'm not sure Alex sleeping under cover would fix much?
I mean, the whole situation is hot but is completely based on porn logic, which was not the impression that the game's story gave me up to this point... except unlimited amount of erections one day after years of not having any.
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The asset in question is called Futalicious. One of the install scripts matches the texture to the skin of the body it's attached to, which is unnatural in its own right. Makes it look very uniform and plasticky. There is another script that adds a separate, more "realistic" texture, but there aren't any controls for modifying its hue/tint. I've got to go in and use Photoshop to try and match the hues, but it's difficult and time-consuming to dial in the correct values because what it looks like in its 2D map isn't a 1-to-1 correlation with its appearance when rendered. I'll try, though. Nothing's been done for chapter 4 which is due any day now (fingers crossed behind back).There's a slight mismatch between the skin tone of Alex's genitals to the rest of the body; I assume because Alex started off life as a female asset/model. Any way to normalize the two?
The scrotum is generally darker than the surrounding skin anyway. TBH, Snax, I didn't even notice. But then, I'm not exactly staring at Alex balls during gameplay anyway. Hahahahaha When I was a kid, there was a huge stigma attached to males who stared at another male's "package." They were called "meat gazer" and treated rather harshly. So, I tend not to notice Alex' "package." Peace, PhatThe asset in question is called Futalicious. One of the install scripts matches the texture to the skin of the body it's attached to, which is unnatural in its own right. Makes it look very uniform and plasticky. There is another script that adds a separate, more "realistic" texture, but there aren't any controls for modifying its hue/tint. I've got to go in and use Photoshop to try and match the hues, but it's difficult and time-consuming to dial in the correct values because what it looks like in its 2D map isn't a 1-to-1 correlation with its appearance when rendered. I'll try, though. Nothing's been done for chapter 4 which is due any day now (fingers crossed behind back).
Well, I notice. In my quest to make everything look as realistic as possible, penes (yes, that's the plural form--look it up ) are a sore point. Well, hopefully not IRL, but figuratively speaking. I have a limited number of assets to pull from (so many double entendres, so little time). I'm pretty sure they were created with an eye more toward caricatured fetish and less toward realism. It's not like Daz researches, creates, and defines penes, aside from the Michelangelo's David unarticulated versions they offer for their stock figures. One lives in hope.The scrotum is generally darker than the surrounding skin anyway. TBH, Snax, I didn't even notice. But then, I'm not exactly staring at Alex balls during gameplay anyway. Hahahahaha When I was a kid, there was a huge stigma attached to males who stared at another male's "package." They were called "meat gazer" and treated rather harshly. So, I tend not to notice Alex' "package." Peace, Phat
Thanks, Snax! Just learned something new today. I had always heard and seen it rendered as penises which is an accepted alternate apparently yet penes seems to be the classical root from which the other interpretations are drawn. Since I had not seen this form previously, it took me a while to find how to pronounce it. Apparently, it is said much like combining pea knees put together as one word or maybe peen ease is closer. Fascinating tidbit of cock lore, my friend! Thanks for sharing.Well, I notice. In my quest to make everything look as realistic as possible, penes (yes, that's the plural form--look it up ) are a sore point. Well, hopefully not IRL, but figuratively speaking. I have a limited number of assets to pull from (so many double entendres, so little time). I'm pretty sure they were created with an eye more toward caricatured fetish and less toward realism. It's not like Daz researches, creates, and defines penes, aside from the Michelangelo's David unarticulated versions they offer for their stock figures. One lives in hope.
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Diligent testers are finishing up beta testing for chapter 4, so it's time to start getting ready! For what? Oh, for Alex's date with Brad, doncha know! Chapter 4 is the longest so far, with almost 800 new renders and around an hour of new content. (More or less, depending on how fast you read...) Set for release on 17 Nov, just in time for Thanksgiving!
What? Wait... Oh yeah! I played the beta, right? Okay... time to DL the published version.
Fair enough. To be honest, by this point in the story, I wanted players to be pissed off and tired of seeing all of the dysfunction hovering over Alex's life. Longing for redemption or retribution, where the former is unlikely and the latter isn't a productive solution.The story is starting to annoy me a bit to be honest. The MC is constantly crying, the mom is going overboard with her woke bullshit.
As far as the police captain goes, well, I wish I could say that I personally trust all people in positions of power to be motivated solely by a dedication to public service and their intransigent morals. (Politicians, anyone?) Yeah, he's over the top, but you could kind of expect that given his a-hole of a son.Especially the scenes in the police station are way over the top. Both the character of the captain and the reaction of the mom were unrealistic. You don't become police captain without some political ability and don't risk your career over something like this.
Hmmm. That's a hard one. I considered it when I was originally outlining out the story. But it's kind of a crucial setup to what happens later in the story. And she isn't not interested in him--she's not against the idea in theory as she stated a couple of times during chap 3, but her lack of sexual attraction is causing her ambivalence. Alex thinks she needs to be interested in Brad. Hence, the title...Also I would have liked the option of not kissing Brad. It feels kind of forced and like the MC is leading him on. Alex is clearly not interested in him.
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AVNSnax the writing is still quite good. Your control of the Characters is on point.
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Definitely not my favorite chapter, but like any story, this one has its ups and downs, so it's ok.
You'll get a bit more insight in chap 5. Well, as to motives, anyway. Rightly or wrongly, that's why I wrote her so over the top at the beginning of the story, so there would be room to grow in the opposite direction. I'm a bit limited by the medium--it's hard to convey a complex, duplicitous psyche a few sentences at a time. Answers are coming.I still really miss the disclosure of Elliot's personality. All that is known about her is that she is insecure about her body and is jealous of the whole family for Alex. For so many years, even the radiation in Chernobyl would have decreased, and the toxicity of this girl is still at the same level.