VN Ren'Py Abandoned Connected [v0.2.5] [ChainZero]

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game was really good. one of these ones where the only complaint I have is that i want to see more. AND i would like to especially comment on the dialog.

at first it was a little off-putting and the subject a little heavy at times, BUT the WAY they talk was eerily age appropriate (more so than most tv and movie scripting these days) and fitting to the characters. i felt like i was listening to my youngest brother sitting and talking to other younger 20ish year olds like him at some points, both annoying yet funny at the same time. :ROFLMAO: so whatever you are doing, please keep it up.

i love the girls we have met so far. gorgeous. all of them. looking forward to seeing more and will keep an eye out for this in the future.
 
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What about Ayana's mother? Or is she off the table?
Yeah, I should probably clear that up now before it becomes a major complaint later.

Gloria isn’t a love interest for our MC. He’s above that level of temptation. Gloria is there because she’s a strong influence to Ayana as a character.

Will she still see some action that isn’t with the MC? Maybe. It’s just not a big priority right now. Ayana, Charlotte and Michelle are the main girls so they’re top priority currently.
 

ZTex

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Will she still see some action that isn’t with the MC? Maybe. It’s just not a big priority right now. Ayana, Charlotte and Michelle are the main girls so they’re top priority currently.
Nichole is not a main girl...

My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined.
 

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Nichole is not a main girl...

My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined.
Main girl as in having an actual story to tell. Nicole is the only character that I created that doesn't have drama attached to her name so there’s no story arc there cause she already has her shit together.

She’ll still be in the story plenty.
 
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ZTex

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Main girl as in having an actual story to tell. Nicole is the only character that I created that doesn't have drama attached to her name so there’s no story arc there cause she already has her shit together.

She’ll still be in the story plenty.
I got what you meant, i was just having some fun.
I like that she's already got her shit together and it's part of what drew me into liking the character. She knows what she wants and isn't afraid of it unlike the majority of the established cast who has hangups.
 

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Yeah, I should probably clear that up now before it becomes a major complaint later.

Gloria isn’t a love interest for our MC. He’s above that level of temptation. Gloria is there because she’s a strong influence to Ayana as a character.

Will she still see some action that isn’t with the MC? Maybe. It’s just not a big priority right now. Ayana, Charlotte and Michelle are the main girls so they’re top priority currently.
boi I swear if you don't have some plans for the main bitch, Susan, I'm gonna be pissed...
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Yeah, I should probably clear that up now before it becomes a major complaint later.

Gloria isn’t a love interest for our MC. He’s above that level of temptation. Gloria is there because she’s a strong influence to Ayana as a character.

Will she still see some action that isn’t with the MC? Maybe. It’s just not a big priority right now. Ayana, Charlotte and Michelle are the main girls so they’re top priority currently.
Thanks, I appreciate your answer. I love the story you are telling!
 

ppoooors

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I think the dev does indeed have plans for Susan.

I'm pretty sure those plans all end with her being dead but it's still a plan.
Nah, haven't you heard? If there's any non-male character in a porn game, they MUST end up sucking MC's dick at some point.
 
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Ayana, Charlotte, Chel, Charlotte's roommate (name has slipped me) and the nurse who's name has also slipped my mind.
The nurse is an LI? That's odd, it seemed like she was a side character at best to me.
 
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