Read through what I've seen so far. Let me clear up some things quickly.
- MC is mixed. Every character I create has a little bit of myself in them. That's what allows me to get the most out of their character I think, though it may not be apparent yet. I live in NYC, so when I created Ayana and the MC, I created them based on my own upbringing. Not exactly like ME but from what I've seen here all my life. The daz assets just made it easier to portray this. So things like dialect, fashion, word use, all these things played a part in their creation.
- Ayana's ass is beautiful. Nothing more to be said there
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- The tags were actually something pretty difficult to get right for me. This is an introduction chapter where not much happens outside of MC and Ayana spending their night together and literally just talking for a majority of it. Sorry if it's not what some of you were expecting. It was just hard for me to balance what will be in the game vs what IS in the game. My first time doing this so forgive my lack of preparation on that part.
- The twins are the MC and the middle girl in the banner. I tried to get the facial features to at least look similar, but it's pretty difficult without making the MC look totally deformed. I'll ask you guys to suspend some disbelief there. BUT The MC's look will actually be updated in Chapter 2. He still probably won't look anything like her really, but I wasn't entirely satisfied with his appearance in this chapter so I revised him a bit.
I think I covered the main talking points for now.