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- Jun 29, 2019
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Really good introduction. Ayana is a gem, the writing is better than most games out right now, and the renders look nice. I'm 100% gonna keep up with your work and support you brother. good job
- Nov 28, 2017
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10/10 game
Do NOT make her cum in the shower scene if you want to see the goodies in the update!
At the beginning I was taken back by the amount of dialogues, it seems more like an illustrated novel than a visual novel, but it grew on me quickly and at the end I didn't mind the pace.
Also twincest is bestcest, but damn I love me some Ayana.
Do NOT make her cum in the shower scene if you want to see the goodies in the update!
At the beginning I was taken back by the amount of dialogues, it seems more like an illustrated novel than a visual novel, but it grew on me quickly and at the end I didn't mind the pace.
Also twincest is bestcest, but damn I love me some Ayana.
- Feb 17, 2018
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Everyone's different, I hear you. This is what I mean when I say all the characters take a little something from me. I'm 22 years old and very introverted. People have told me that I'm a very introspective person. That I like to think in different ways from other people, and it's true. If it ain't deep I really don't wanna hear about it.
I'll try to let up on it a bit. I myself don't like heavy narration in games, but sometimes I can get carried away with the introspection because these are all thoughts that really run through my mind personally. So when I start writing in character there are times when I just keep going on and on and on. It becomes less about the character and more about me and my thoughts, which is something I want to tame.
Kinda like right now eh? Finna write a whole essay on myself without even realizing it.
great start of the game curious what ill become as a whole..like the personalities with the slang words ect and that mc is mix so expecting see more and i can relate to it as well since im mix in my late teens to so good see change of pace in a game i give it a 9/10 only because the jerking off scene render is unbalanced and split like it was going through the process of rendering the scene but never finished which took the flavor out for me to enjoy because of the different shadings especially since it was during the action so hopefully that wont be an issue in later updates but for the premiere release good work
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- Nov 18, 2017
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I uploaded those images after using unren from the folder, Wasn't a screenshot from in game. So i'm 100% sure it's the renders themselves.
But thanks for letting me know about the rendering options, Didn't know you could change that
renders 10/10 - gorgeous
Good start to the game and looks v promising. keep it up, definitely one to watch.
Good start to the game and looks v promising. keep it up, definitely one to watch.
The only thing I don't like about this game is it has the kind of illogical decisions trees where completely random things lead to sex scenes and the seemingly correct decisions do not. That kind of progression is just never good and all it does is force players to play with a walkthrough open, which just takes away from actually playing the game.
I don't want to have to choose certain good scenes over other good scenes. What acceptable reason is there to design the game so that I have to do that?
I don't want to have to choose certain good scenes over other good scenes. What acceptable reason is there to design the game so that I have to do that?
- Feb 17, 2018
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I wouldn't say illogical, but I do hear you. I won't make a habit out of doing that cause like you I hate playing with a walkthrough open. It takes me out of things. You don't have to worry about these choices in particular though. With the exception of others, the choices, for the most part, affect outcomes on a chapter by chapter basis with certain decisions that carry over. No decision in this chapter will have any lasting effect.
I'm relatively new to Ren'Py so the decision trees in this chapter were more so a way for me to get acclimated to the format to lessen the chance of bugs so I can confidently create more significant decision trees in the future if need be. So I used the sexual content as a way to test myself freely. For the most part, things will be pretty straight forward. At the same time though, I don't exactly want to telegraph every outcome. But I will definitely try to make it as light as possible to prevent the need for a walkthrough.
- Dec 27, 2018
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Hmmm, I did this, butl getting that weird thing with those particular renders only, the other renders are fine. They were not like that on the original run through, did it again out of boredom.
- Feb 11, 2018
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are you joking they is a
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- Aug 5, 2017
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Playing through it right now and I'm very impressed so far, might make a signature or two in a bit.
Also, doggo:
Also, doggo:
- Nov 18, 2018
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So which of those girls is supposed to be his twin exactly? Because you have me curious. He's clearly mixed race (black/white) but not a single girl in the main banner looks like him at all. So I'm having a hard time buying the twin sister thing. You either need to tone down his racial traits or up hers because no one looks remotely similar to him.
- May 10, 2018
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heres the thing...identical..and fraternal twins..come out bam bam..but one set could look completely diff while the other is completely identical(also..identical twins means two boys..or two girls..because..identical..so by default..they are fraternal) and because as the dev stated(and i figured out) he is mixed race..that adds to the variance already of how fraternal twins could look..heck..one could come out with tight curl dark hard and tan skin..the other could be a pale ginger...yet still pop outta the same momma-hootch a minute apart...basically..dev has freerange options to go with...fraternal twins..do not have to have any distinguishing markers in common.
- Aug 5, 2017
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New update meant a new signature, I'll make some more when more ladies are being introduced.
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