- Jul 12, 2017
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Read through the comments and they seem pretty positive overall. Downloading the game for a look.
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- May 28, 2018
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Well, some games are worth the wait, though. For example CoBD and BaDIK, those two update pretty much every 3 months or so, but they're worth the wait.
There are other games to keep you busy in the meanwhile
- Oct 24, 2019
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Not gonna lie I was expecting some of the same generic looking mc that gets overused. Cheers to variety.
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Seems like it lol which is cool
- Oct 23, 2019
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Renders look good, dialogues good but little boring.
Just intro so nothing to say anything about story.
3 updates continues good to say review of the game, looking forward it
Best of luck
Just intro so nothing to say anything about story.
3 updates continues good to say review of the game, looking forward it
Best of luck
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- Feb 17, 2018
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Honestly, I'm really not but when I was in high school I would be surrounded by sneaker heads. I was actually the guy who would get roasted for wearing anything that wasn't Nike or Jordan. But I like to think I have a nice fashion sense for myself that doesn't rely on expensive name brands
- Nov 15, 2019
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Not all twins look alike genius
- Oct 23, 2017
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Top notch writing, story and renders! Can't wait for next version, i hope ChainZero is thinking for future harem tag, but if not - multiple saves will be, haha. Good luck with that amazing game.
- Aug 19, 2018
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nice story telling but it did feel a bit drawn out. i do hope to see more chances for choices more often in the future. what i really like was how MC and Ayana talk to each other. slang and all. doesn't feel so monotone and actually sounds like a couple of friends talking to each other. i really hope that sticks.
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- May 8, 2018
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ChainZero LOVED the game, beautiful work man
loved the look of the MC's apartment, it looks very cozy
a nice big fluffy carpet in front of the TV would be a nice edition too
MC has a dog, and it's a golden lab, now that is a BIG + in my book and she is absolutely adorable
Ayana is beautiful, she reminds me so much of my ex, some scenes when she is face to face with the MC is just a little bit scary for me to process
loved her conection and scenes when playing with Lola, great job
the renders and animations are very well done, no suprises there
the only negative thing in my book are those few words by Ayana when she is talking like she's a black dude from the hood, that needs to go
putting this on my watch list, great job on your first VN
loved the look of the MC's apartment, it looks very cozy
a nice big fluffy carpet in front of the TV would be a nice edition too
MC has a dog, and it's a golden lab, now that is a BIG + in my book and she is absolutely adorable
Ayana is beautiful
, she reminds me so much of my ex, some scenes when she is face to face with the MC is just a little bit scary for me to process loved her conection and scenes when playing with Lola, great job
the renders and animations are very well done, no suprises there
the only negative thing in my book are those few words by Ayana when she is talking like she's a black dude from the hood, that needs to go
putting this on my watch list, great job on your first VN
- Aug 19, 2018
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idk im mostly for how she talks. it just reminds me of how friends talk in reality. seems more legit. but at the same time i guess it's feels different reading it compared to how u hear it.ChainZero LOVED the game, beautiful work man
the only negative thing in my book are those few words by Ayana when she is talking like she's a black dude from the hood, that needs to go
- May 8, 2018
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i kinda doubt that a teen white girl talks like a black dude from the hood
the buddy buddy talk is a big + but not this kind...
- Aug 19, 2018
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....so much to learn about the world lol. but maybe im just using it off my experience. the one i know uses both hood and spanish slang. it's pretty fun to watch not gonna lie lol. but regarding Ayana i dont think she uses it that much. enough to be noticable but not enough to be .... stereotypical. besides isn't she mixed? but ima really chalk it down to a reading-hearing difference.i kinda doubt that a teen white girl talks like a black dude from the hood
the buddy buddy talk is a big + but not this kind...
- Feb 17, 2018
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Thanks for the kind words. I'm truly glad people seem to like it so much so far. In terms of Ayana's language, I won't make it annoyingly off-putting. If you read one of my previous comments, I mentioned that I'm from NYC. Born & raised in the hood. I don't love it, but the way she talks just comes naturally to me because this is how I've been bred to talk to my peers since I was like 13. I'm 22 now. It's vulgar but it's also just how things are. I understand it might be uncomfortable or cringy for others, and I did take that into account when I was writing this. But I'll make sure the slang doesn't get too off the rails.ChainZero LOVED the game, beautiful work man
loved the look of the MC's apartment, it looks very cozy
a nice big fluffy carpet in front of the TV would be a nice edition too
MC has a dog, and it's a golden lab, now that is a BIG + in my book and she is absolutely adorable
Ayana is beautiful
loved her conection and scenes when playing with Lola, great job
the renders and animations are very well done, no suprises there
the only negative thing in my book are those few words by Ayana when she is talking like she's a black dude from the hood, that needs to go
putting this on my watch list, great job on your first VN
Like many, I find it a bit unattractive when a girl cusses too much or tries too hard. I faced a LOT of that in high school so I tried to find a balance with Ayana (who is black btw.) She's a beautiful girl but I did want to portray her with some flaws. I believe the slang adds another layer to her character and it makes her a bit unique, even if that uniqueness may appear unattractive. That's the point.