VN Ren'Py Abandoned Connected [v0.2.5] [ChainZero]

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I would play it because it looks great, but ... I'm afraid that it will be another production with updates every 2-3 months; (
Well, some games are worth the wait, though. For example CoBD and BaDIK, those two update pretty much every 3 months or so, but they're worth the wait.
There are other games to keep you busy in the meanwhile :)
 

EthanHunt95

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Renders look good, dialogues good but little boring.
Just intro so nothing to say anything about story.
3 updates continues good to say review of the game, looking forward it (y)
Best of luck(y)(y)
 

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Seems like it lol which is cool
Honestly, I'm really not but when I was in high school I would be surrounded by sneaker heads. I was actually the guy who would get roasted for wearing anything that wasn't Nike or Jordan. But I like to think I have a nice fashion sense for myself that doesn't rely on expensive name brands
 

ivanov95

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Top notch writing, story and renders! Can't wait for next version, i hope ChainZero is thinking for future harem tag, but if not - multiple saves will be, haha. Good luck with that amazing game.
 
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nice story telling but it did feel a bit drawn out. i do hope to see more chances for choices more often in the future. what i really like was how MC and Ayana talk to each other. slang and all. doesn't feel so monotone and actually sounds like a couple of friends talking to each other. i really hope that sticks.
 

SpikeZg

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ChainZero LOVED the game, beautiful work man :giggle:(y)

loved the look of the MC's apartment, it looks very cozy :)
a nice big fluffy carpet in front of the TV would be a nice edition too :)

MC has a dog, and it's a golden lab, now that is a BIG + in my book and she is absolutely adorable :love:
Ayana is beautiful :love:, she reminds me so much of my ex, some scenes when she is face to face with the MC is just a little bit scary for me to process :D
loved her conection and scenes when playing with Lola, great job :)

the renders and animations are very well done, no suprises there :cool:

the only negative thing in my book are those few words by Ayana when she is talking like she's a black dude from the hood, that needs to go :)


putting this on my watch list, great job on your first VN :giggle:(y)
 

7Alex7

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This game really has a lot of potential. Good story, love ayana obviously. but the n-word really needs to go. other than that great game
 

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ChainZero LOVED the game, beautiful work man :giggle:(y)

the only negative thing in my book are those few words by Ayana when she is talking like she's a black dude from the hood, that needs to go :)
idk im mostly for how she talks. it just reminds me of how friends talk in reality. seems more legit. but at the same time i guess it's feels different reading it compared to how u hear it.
 
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SpikeZg

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idk im mostly for how she talks. it just reminds me of how friends talk in reality. seems more legit. but at the same time i guess it's feels different reading it compared to how u hear it.
i kinda doubt that a teen white girl talks like a black dude from the hood :)
the buddy buddy talk is a big + but not this kind...
 

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i kinda doubt that a teen white girl talks like a black dude from the hood :)
the buddy buddy talk is a big + but not this kind...
....so much to learn about the world lol. but maybe im just using it off my experience. the one i know uses both hood and spanish slang. it's pretty fun to watch not gonna lie lol. but regarding Ayana i dont think she uses it that much. enough to be noticable but not enough to be .... stereotypical. besides isn't she mixed? but ima really chalk it down to a reading-hearing difference.
 
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