VN Ren'Py Consciousness [Ch.1 Final] [Inwatch]

[Inwatch]

Reached the end of the prologue. Would say it contains spoilers but the picture in the original post reveals what im going to say.

There is an option to get a blowjob from a cute pink hair girl, after agreeing, she begins, then as she is doing it, as things are getting interesting with her, there is a knock at the door and she disappears...where too is a mystery. This character was cute enough to be an LI but for me, the idea of having an LI that sucks off a random stranger in a toilet cubicle and from her very brief dialogue who also does other things with random strangers just isn't my thing...personal preference.

Then after the interruption you end up on a couch in the exact same place you would be if you refused the blowjob. Why include the blowjob scene if its not going to be a full scene or lead to anything other than right back to the the couch, this brought nothing useful to the story. Then you are stuck with either wanking into the toilet (not shown) and going home or shagging some random woman who sits next to you and then going home but for me, after thinking, finally, some action and got built up with the pink hair girl, you just feel deflated and dissatisfied with the sex scene with the other woman.

This game has good animation, the penis is comically oversized but no real complaints with the art work but the story is a mess, convoluted with nonsense with choices that lead to no mans land.

It took about 4 hours to finish this and it was a struggle, all the important things are lost between the constant rambling with the penis. Whatever they are trying to to do with this game clearly went straight over my head.

I hate to think the kind of grind the sandbox element if introduced is going to be like after this slog to achieve the simplest little thing.

Thank you for the feedback and for giving it a try!

Sad to hear it was a struggle to get through but have to clarify that the very brief dialogue with the girl you mentioned is supposed to mean the exact opposite. As in she's never done it before like she says later during the scene. It's more of a talk the talk but never walked the walk. Or however that saying goes. But yeah thanks again for giving it a try.

Have a good one!

sooo goooooooodd thx chef <3
10/10 game btw

Thank you, thank you!

You're the one who's 10/10 btw.

Have a great one you beautiful bastard!

 

[Gilber_bestram@176]

How can I miss this game ??? Now this is a good first release, I played it for the entire evening and haven't finished it. Really promising, hope dev can keep up with the work.
A few question thought, I can count at least 20 Love interests in this game, so how can you handle the number, will it be like grandma house or my dorm, where thing will process quickly or will you has some many LIs and many side LI that get less focus ?

 

[Inwatch]

How can I miss this game ??? Now this is a good first release, I played it for the entire evening and haven't finished it. Really promising, hope dev can keep up with the work.
A few question thought, I can count at least 20 Love interests in this game, so how can you handle the number, will it be like grandma house or my dorm, where thing will process quickly or will you has some many LIs and many side LI that get less focus ?

Thank you for the kind words and giving it a try!

I'm really stoked to hear you enjoyed it and I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters just as much. Sad to say though that chapter 2 is going to be released in parts because of exposure and all that stuff so it'll be much smaller releases for a while. But about your question it'll be more like the prior with some processing fast and others at a much slower pace. And as cheesy as it sounds I don't really see any of the LIs as side characters ... Or at least in my mind they all have important parts to play in the story even if some will get more attention than others. Hope that answers your question and thanks once more for the kind words!

Best wishes!

 

[Gilber_bestram@176]

Thank you for the kind words and giving it a try!

I'm really stoked to hear you enjoyed it and I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters just as much. Sad to say though that chapter 2 is going to be released in parts because of exposure and all that stuff so it'll be much smaller releases for a while. But about your question it'll be more like the prior with some processing fast and others at a much slower pace. And as cheesy as it sounds I don't really see any of the LIs as side characters ... Or at least in my mind they all have important parts to play in the story even if some will get more attention than others. Hope that answers your question and thanks once more for the kind words!

Best wishes!

If so, I think you should made an in-game info list or menu of the girls, so that we can keep up with who is who.

 

[smarty101]

Holy moly!

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Before diving into a spoiler tag I first have to say thank you so much for the absolutely amazing feedback! But wait! There's also kind words AND help with grammar? What is this?! Christmas?!
For real though thank you! I greatly appreciate all of it! And being Danish with terrible "," control (Even worse in English!) the grammar corrections are indeed a blessing as well.
But now let me praise you some more away from prying eyes... Or from those who don't want any spoilers at least.

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And of course I wish you all the best!


Thank you for giving it a try and I hope you'll enjoy it!

Have a beautiful one!

+<3



Thank you for the question and kind words!

Now unfortunately I have to disappoint you but no incest planned due to Patreon rules. The closest will be during group sex but again have to stay within Patreon rules so don't know how far it can go yet.

Have a good one!

Why would you be worried about Patreon's Incest rules? I just played chp1 and did not see any family members. The three girls you meet near the very beginning are not family members; you only think of them like family because of how close you are to them, so having them in your Harem would not be anywhere close to incest, or are we going to meet blood-related family members in future chapters?? Im glad to see there will be no NTR
Oh, and how often will there be updates??

 

[Inwatch]

If so, I think you should made an in-game info list or menu of the girls, so that we can keep up with who is who.

Since you mentioned it I'll show you a little spoiler of what I'm working on right now.

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Why would you be worried about Patreon's Incest rules? I just played chp1 and did not see any family members. The three girls you meet near the very beginning are not family members; you only think of them like family because of how close you are to them, so having them in your Harem would not be anywhere close to incest, or are we going to meet blood-related family members in future chapters?? Im glad to see there will be no NTR
Oh, and how often will there be updates??

Yeah it's more in the sense of not planning on adding it and such. Or the reason at least. There are going to be some blood-related family members you'll meet later on but that's spoilers for now and they're not going to be LI's or potential LI's if that makes sense. Ideally I'd like to release a full chapter every 3-6 months that's at least the same size or larger than chapter. 1. However because of exposure and all that I'll release chapter 2. in parts. And I'm afraid I don't know yet how long those'll be or how often they'll be released. I hope that answers your questions and thank you for trying out the game!

Have a good one!

 

[DraxisSilencer1000]

I'll stop for now (stopped playing around meeting Jamie), the monologuing's a bit too much. Also, the interactions with the MC's subconcious should be limited.

I'll be stopping for now and maybe this will be addressed on the next update.

Lastly, I have mixed feelings on the prospect of the harem itself. I'm not sure how will the Dev make it convincing that the MC can just nab Valerie and all of her daughters, whilst being the one that granted the MC's potential harem (that speech she declares after saying that you want a harem).

Lastly, some choices have points/variables so it would be wise to provide a walkthrough.

 

[Inwatch]

I'll stop for now (stopped playing around meeting Jamie), the monologuing's a bit too much. Also, the interactions with the MC's subconcious should be limited.

I'll be stopping for now and maybe this will be addressed on the next update.

Lastly, I have mixed feelings on the prospect of the harem itself. I'm not sure how will the Dev make it convincing that the MC can just nab Valerie and all of her daughters, whilst being the one that granted the MC's potential harem (that speech she declares after saying that you want a harem).

Lastly, some choices have points/variables so it would be wise to provide a walkthrough.

Thank you for giving the game a try!

A walkthrough will be released soon showing all the choices and such. PDF though.

Take care!

 

[Bob69]

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[Gilber_bestram@176]

Well that was very fast. Also where is the new image

 

[housekinokuni1974]

Superb visuals, hs2 banzai
Just maybe a little worried by the number of girls, we all know how it can quickly turn in a kind of black hole when submerged by proposition, let see how dev manage with that

 

[zc077]

Valarie 47 age really? loll she is beautiful i want fuck she

 

[Kazutoyo]

Took a while until sex happened, but I enjoyed it. Good premise. Look forward to more!

 

[skyrfen]

Consciousness-CH1

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[Vortex@]

What was added? Ended the same place as before

 

[Ass~God]

Hey Dev, in the game characters menu, the protagonist's name shows the default name, not the player's given name.

 

[ironboxx]

Hello, this game looks like another game i played before but i dont remember the name, in this game we have incest and a girl with lara croft cosplay, can someone remember this please ?

 

[MrBenny]

Adjustment MOD (V1.0)

Hello...
I complied together a few minor utility mods, as well included a few UI adjustments which improves function and visibility for this Ren'Py title...

• Edited the gui.rpy file, added additional font shading outlines. (Increases font visibility).
• Included the Universal Choice Descriptor mod (this mod can display on screen some hidden content data that is behind story choices...if there are any coded.)
• Included the 0x52_URM tool. (it can almost do everything with Ren'Py titles...edit and display)
• Also included a mod that hide's or display's the quick menu by pressing your Q key. (Used to clean up the dialog area of your screen.)
• Included a custom dialog text outline mod (places a slight dark shadow outline around the dialog and name font (makes it easier to see the dialog text against variously changing background images).
• Replaced the default text box with a custom dark shaded text box. (Improves visibility without blocking the back ground images.)
• Included a text box opacity and font slider mod, (which is used to adjust the shading intensity of the dialog text box, and or increase / decrease the dialog font size.)

Installation:
Just extract and merge the mod's game folder with this titles game folder (over write when prompted). Then run your game.exe, and enjoy this title's minor UI changes and added utility features.

Also, unless major changes are done to the GUI file...this mod will not require regular updates like walk through mod's does. As well the URM mod comes with it's own self updating feature...so when an update is available an update prompt message will happen. Just follow the instructions to update this utility mod.

Regards.

(Image below displaying the added opacity and font slider mod. As well a few sample images of the updated text box, Choice Descriptor and URM mod.)

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[sisco1986]

the story its pretty good but after 15 minutes i started skipping the monologues, they serve no purpose and yet there is a monologue every 4 lines of dialogue

it feels like playing the game with beavis and butthead as color commentators

edit: patricia looks like a fucking clown

 

[Maximilian87]

i was sold on the world domination, but

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consider me interested.