HTML Completed Corrupt Girlfriend [Final] [Kinkzgames]

[curlyNadine]

You have feet and foojob in the tags, but i think it wouldn´t hurt to point out in the description that this game ist so feet fetish heavy..otherwise despite it´s your first game, i don´t think its worse than most game out there, so don´t worry about that^^

 

[vince85]

good start, thnaks for your works

 

[Policanov]

To be the first one looks good
In future games I suggest introducing corruption. In this for example, the end is inevitably close.
In the event that there was corruption, I would go slowly advancing which would add eroticism

 

[LazyKeks]

So is this a ntr / cuck focused game or is there an option to play only vanilla?

 

[dingo4life]

Im thinking of cutting this short at 5 days and ill be taking this all into concideration thank you for the advice!, I only added cheating on day 3 but yea i feel like I should have added more of that element from the start. I would like to reimagine this game with all the recent input and experience so ill be starting a "sequel" soon

I suggest you finish this first, it's like making a painting or writing a book, if you constantly restart every time you realize something could have been done better, you will never finish the product, which in turn is also an important learning experience. My suggestion to any dev of any kind, porn or otherwise is to make several small games (you mentioned this was smaller so that is good) before trying something grand and have a ultra basic concept and work from there. How Deep Rock Galactic was made, had a friend who spoke with them personally, their idea was literally "we want a mining game, well who mines, dwarves, lets go".

Also personally I prefer webms to just static pictures, static pictures are fine when you got artists involved but with real porn and I'm not too much into the hotwife, more of the hidden sex kinda stuff. Make the game you want to make but please take my above advice into consideration.

 

[Ma_jin]

ill give it a try

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I played through it and it feels too short and rushed so far. There's some good ideas here but the dialog and story needs a lot of work. There's not much corruption going on if your girlfriend decides to invite someone over to fuck them without telling you on day 2 after 3 minutes of playing.

Big yikes. Thanks for enduring that so I don't have to.

 

[mistkae]

Like others have said, too much foot fetish content, and that's a turn off for me. If it's going to be more than half the content, it should be part of the title or description, not just one tag.

edit: And, yeah, there are too many problems with the writing to even list. The MC is even called "husband" at some point. It needs major work

 

[InfamousRebel]

You will learn a lot just from finishing this game so I'm not gonna be critical today as others seemed to have pretty much got you covered. I like cuckold, hotwife etc. so I'm here until it's complete...Don't abandon lol

 

[liquid74]

I find this game totally hot. I really loved the parts when the GF was watching porn. Please include more of this! I really wanna see that vid clip you included at the start where she is masturbating to porn on her laptop. Could u share clip name? Send me a message if that works better. Great game and stay at it!

 

[Matt3642]

I will say good start to a game.. i do have a few pointers.
1. be careful how closely you try to "please" people remember this is your vision and although you can take onboard what others say dont change what YOU thought the game would be.
2. There could be abit more flow to the pictures.. instead of randomly clicking everywhere to see if you have missed any.
3. I know everyone is in a rush to get to the bang but a slower corruption into the end game would prob be better to see instead of the i look at pictures on my phone... next day i will jump on the d%$k or a person i magically summon.. like maybe start with her sneaking around and him suspecting or finding odd stuff...ect..

but it is a good start ^^ hope you stick with it.. oh and as i said in no.1 feel free to ignore my opinion if it doesnt match your vision..lol

 

[Deleted member 2509864]

Awesome so far

 

[anon48]

just a friendly suggestion, since I assume english isn't your primary language, get a grammar and spell checker.

 

[AriaZaia]

It's a pretty good start, keep it up!

 

[Gerrry1969]

This is great.

 

[chabam]

niiiiiiiiiiiiice

 

[Airell]

I don't know if this is a game to corrupt the girlfriend, or if it's focused on NTR? Oh, it's a NTR. I thought the player would corrupt his girlfriend and possibly other girls. lol

Note: But from what I can see in the intro, and in the code, I advise the dev to create an open (sandbox) system. If you add time, date, and some basic statuses systems, this could make it possible to add scenes in a more efficient way and more easily than a VN structure.

 

[xanoss]

I don't know if this is a game to corrupt the girlfriend, or if it's focused on NTR? Oh, it's a NTR. I thought the player would corrupt his girlfriend and possibly other girls. lol

Note: But from what I can see in the intro, and in the code, I advise the dev to create an open (sandbox) system. If you add time, date, and some basic statuses systems, this could make it possible to add scenes in a more efficient way and more easily than a VN structure.

lol thanks for the advice. date and time do be sounding hard for me to make but i see what you are saying, My idea for my next game was to kinda have stages where there will be lust corruption and money, and raising lust or corruption will unlock and or change the events? and then money would also unlock events with the items you get.

 

[Deleted member 2744443]

So the player, if you Tom Cruise, wish to participate are cuckold. Your so called gf gives you a foot job and then puts out an add looking for a big cock to fuck her and cream pie her so she can tell you how good he was. Sounds great for Tom Cruise, but me, I would kick her to the curb.

 

[Spacc123]

Image not working when I'm going to work (got to next chapter)

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