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Hi,
Image not working when I'm going to work (got to next chapter)

<img src="img/rooms/work.jpg"" hight=500 width=500/>
Hi,
I have edited the html of the game - your error is solved (file name format was webp not jpg + a double quote)
I also edited some of the text - it's not perfect but your eyes will bleed a little less than before ;)
GF's name is now Ashley (no longer Ashely) or simply Girlfriend
some vocabulary was changed - not everything (so there is still some engrish) - most grammar was changed.

(make a back up of your html before putting this one)
 

Melted

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Nov 23, 2019
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Well Im having fun so far! I dont plan on making a never ending game like alot of these devs. Im learning alot as I go so i appreciate the feedback! I Dont plan on making it never ending Im thinking 7 days or chapters, per VN/game story. I know how it feels tho my favorite html games are dead! part of the reason i wanted to make my own lol
Based off of your own reply and the few screenshots of the game, you obviously need to learn how to proofread. I'm guessing English isn't your native tongue, though you're probably a pretty fluent speaker. But when putting pen to paper, your grammar needs a lot of help. For example: Im, dont and alot are not words. I'm(I am), don't(do not) and a lot are correct. I mean, there's a built in proofreader for these replies, why ignore everything underlined in red?
 

xanoss

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Based off of your own reply and the few screenshots of the game, you obviously need to learn how to proofread. I'm guessing English isn't your native tongue, though you're probably a pretty fluent speaker. But when putting pen to paper, your grammar needs a lot of help. For example: Im, dont and alot are not words. I'm(I am), don't(do not) and a lot are correct. I mean, there's a built in proofreader for these replies, why ignore everything underlined in red?
Hmmmm I never saw the red underline I will look into this
 

Gerrry1969

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Jun 23, 2020
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Based off of your own reply and the few screenshots of the game, you obviously need to learn how to proofread. I'm guessing English isn't your native tongue, though you're probably a pretty fluent speaker. But when putting pen to paper, your grammar needs a lot of help. For example: Im, dont and alot are not words. I'm(I am), don't(do not) and a lot are correct. I mean, there's a built in proofreader for these replies, why ignore everything underlined in red?
Why do I see this shit in every thread. Stop trying to beat down Devs on minor points of the English language. Again, the comment complaining has awful grammar, and I'm guessing you used a colon to be ironic? You are clutching at straws.
 

Toweke

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Oct 27, 2017
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I'm more the sneaking around and she's cheating and you have to find clues and stuff but it's okay. Very basic and it's catering to a niche that I think is criminally underserved.
Totally agree, those are the best kind of ntr games IMO. Subtlety is everything. This game seems more like Netorase, which is valid in its own right but needs to have a well developed relationship to pull off.

To the dev: my main advice (just from looking at the pictures) would be to work on your grammar/English. There is quite a few grammatical errors in both the game text and in some of your replies, a lot of it is very basic stuff that a spellchecker would pick up on like wrong capitalizations, lack of periods, comma's, etc.
 

PirateLoko

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Feb 23, 2020
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Congratulations
The game is good, but try in the next update to change all pics for 10 second vids.
 

MrFriendly

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Feb 23, 2020
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Haven't played this update, but did play the last... Grammar errors are glaring but understandable when it is not the developers native language. Most disappointing part of the game is that there aren't any choices, the girlfriend doesn't even try to hide her cheating, the MC is powerless to stop her or throw her out or participate. It feels like a porn clip viewer more than a game. However, as the first attempt it is not even close to the worst thing I've seen on this site, look forward to seeing what the developer does with this or in their next game.
 

Qwerfy

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Jan 17, 2018
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Another [Text Based] [Real Porn] game to be [Abandoned] after a few updates. Most of these types of games just don't survive to [Completion].
And how do I know that you may ask??.. For a week now I've been going through every game on this site that isn't a [VN] and 9.5 (9) / 10 is already [Abandoned] :cautious: The 0.5 are [Onhold].

Kind words to the Dev .. If you want your game to survive to completion, don't make it TL;DR and possibly too complex that you're gonna run out of the necessary pictures pinched straight off the 'net.
That's blatantly false what are you talking about
 
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m4pII

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Jun 22, 2019
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Not a fan of such stories.
In fact, it is a cuckold simulator and a kinetic novel.
There is very little content, but the images that are there are used wisely, and in general the created scenes are quite hot.
 
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Centrophy

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Dec 2, 2017
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Not a fan of such stories.
In fact, it is a cuckold simulator and a kinetic novel.
There is very little content, but the images that are there are used wisely, and in general the created scenes are quite hot.
Agreed. This isn't a game. It's a nukige or a short story which is fine I guess for someone dipping their feet for a niche genre like hot wifeing. This latest version even refers to the girlfriend as a wife which must have been an accident.
 

he_found_you

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Jun 11, 2017
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Quick one to finish, but there's fappable material, 400+mb 180+ images/gifs.
Good choice to not focus on the bull, but on her.
Wish there's more in the next update.
 
Jun 23, 2020
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I like it, straight to the point without endless grinding bs. There's tons of games who does that already and drag on and on and on and it takes forever updates to get a few scenes, I rather have stuff like this once a while that just goes straight into it
 
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