HTML Completed Corrupt Girlfriend [Final] [Kinkzgames]

[Deleted member 3145675]

Hi,
as it has been raining all day long here - I took from my going-out time to edit the html (again).
-You can now give the girlfriend the first name of your choice.
-work.jpg error fixed again
- 98.75% of grammar fixed.

-warning: as I mainly did this for myself - the text for 0.6 has been.. let's say heavily edited and redacted - most incorrect words or verbs were changed for either a correct or more suitable one - or for one that pleased me.
complete sentences were rewritten.
- spaces between sentences were erased - group of sentences were created (a bit less for 0.6 specific text)
the story is not changed but the Boyfriend is now extremely willing to watch his beloved GF at work. (so to speak)

(this is by far edit: NOT a perfect work, but I thought it might interest at least a few people)
Have fun.
TC

 

[Novel Lover]

"WARNING ITS MY FIRST GAME AND ITS NOT THAT GREAT
Thank you for the feedback I will be reading it all and working harder to make somthing better!"

It's quotes like this that show you how nervous people are when they present something they made for the first time to the public

 

[phupdup]

This VN needs to have a proper flow and timeline. For each day we have a set of location events which will only advance to the next set when mc goes to work and then goes to bed. Replace this with some serial story and exposition transitioning between passages like:

- get up with morning wood and either watch gf masturbate or participate
- go to shower after gf is already in there and peek/not peek, then walk in
- go back to bedroom to dress and comment on gf's outfit choice
- go to kitchen to make breakfast
- eat in living room and watch porn, etc

Then mc goes to work after blowing most of the day wanking repeatedly and somehow manages to work a full day without dying of exhaustion. Also it's amazing he spends the entire day at work remotely dealing with gf and yet somehow doesn't get his ass fired when the corporate spyware detects that he is doing basically jack shit.

This is a serial VN so passage advancement should be just "next, next, next".

 

[EarmesAeledas]

Maybe add her getting impregnated? or is that in the future plans by chance?

 

[sabia]

Then mc goes to work after blowing most of the day wanking repeatedly and somehow manages to work a full day without dying of exhaustion. Also it's amazing he spends the entire day at work remotely dealing with gf and yet somehow doesn't get his ass fired when the corporate spyware detects that he is doing basically jack shit.

Lol, yeah

This is a serial VN so passage advancement should be just "next, next, next".

True.

On a bit of a meta note, I'm starting to see a bit more of those VN HTML games. Shouldn't there be a tag for those like we have for Renpy VN?

 

[kurailxix]

might of started with her blowing, then sex, then catching her on camera having sex without a condom while your at work
so when you move her panties aside the creampies are no longer a secret.

so the "she forgot the condom" comment she can be like, you know ive been getting creampied while your at work anyways, instead of condoms never coming up untill you mention them, maybe a condom agreement

i agree we don't need super slow buildup, i skip through some visual novels, but from nothing to raw sex and being creampied on the first night skips alot of possible escalation, could spy on her touching herself and thinking about being creampied.

or see things on camera before seeing them in person, have him tell himself if he tells her he saw it on camera, she would hide it, so he has to keep it to himself to be informed

and he slowly gets more and more turned on watching her on camera and warms up to cuckholding and looking forward to it

could add some early scenes, move existing scenes to a later date, but I know the above probably isn't what your going for

there is some esculation already, like her looking at her exes video masterbating

 

[spook154]

I really like this game, thanks for making it and i hope you finish it at some point and make plenty more in similar ways! i enjoy it a lot

 

[khaldrogan]

Great game, But could be batter. And please don't turn the main protagonist into a bitch or a toy for them to play around and can't do anything. And maybe you can turn the story around where the protagonist man up and do something.

 

[Novel Lover]

Great game, But could be batter. And please don't turn the main protagonist into a bitch or a toy for them to play around and can't do anything. And maybe you can turn the story around where the protagonist man up and do something.

well said.

 

[loqex]

What.. no stepsis adventures? Can't believe there is game without! Shocked just shocked!

On another note.. seems this game is developing nicely!

 

[The 1★ Dude]

Good ntr / cuckold content. Hope for more.

 

[nickku1]

Well Im having fun so far! I dont plan on making a never ending game like alot of these devs. Im learning alot as I go so i appreciate the feedback! I Dont plan on making it never ending Im thinking 7 days or chapters, per VN/game story. I know how it feels tho my favorite html games are dead! part of the reason i wanted to make my own lol

redbull gives you wings
now fly!

 

[atrebor68]

Honest. Do you want to make your game a great success? instead of taking pictures from the internet, take the photos with your girlfriend. you'll see what an audience !!

 

[Deleted member 3145675]

Hi,
As a pure exercise in futility, and continuing on an "edited" version of the game. Here is an unofficial 0.6 rewritten to be:
- How I became a cuckold to show my Wife I loved her!! - Edited Version

includes:
- a 0 to 5.000 mph in 1.3 sec vanilla to porn now "wife" that may actually have been waiting for the MC's move for some time.
- an extremely more than willing MC that may have aimed for a bit more than he could chew. (or swallow?)
- almost every page is a self-contained "story" able to satisfy most adepts of cuckoldry.
- BBC fetish included
- SPH included (if you don't know what it is - don't play this version)
- a cute Wife who loves being a woman. (if that even means something...)
- a small dose of humor. (I'm not saying it's funny!)
- humorous references to some movies.
- new font colors that'll burn your retinas!
- most pages have "logical" links between themselves (better to read them starting from top to bottom - gosh that sounded dirty...)

Warning: You really need to love cuckoldry to read this version - I'm serious! Just read the title!

Legal BS: this is just a modified html - you still need the folders of the base game.

Have fun, stay safe, wear a mask, a condom, a trench coat, leather boots chaps and hats, some earplugs, a buttplug, and drive safely!
TC.

Edit: it's more of a novella than a game, there are no choices.

 

[The 1★ Dude]

Somebody have 0.7?

 

[Deleted member 770309]

Great game, But could be batter. And please don't turn the main protagonist into a bitch or a toy for them to play around and can't do anything. And maybe you can turn the story around where the protagonist man up and do something.

Well the MC is already a beta bitch the hole game seems to be about being a cuck.

 

[The 1★ Dude]

Seems like the game got abandoned? 0.7 should be released 2 months ago but I cannot find anything about it even on patreon.

 

[Deleted member 770309]

So the player, if you Tom Cruise, wish to participate are cuckold. Your so called gf gives you a foot job and then puts out an add looking for a big cock to fuck her and cream pie her so she can tell you how good he was. Sounds great for Tom Cruise, but me, I would kick her to the curb.

True that the bitch belongs to the streets.

 

[Alexander_Dayraven]

but this one is VN i assume. just not tagged.
i need more RP sandboxes !

Any recommendations for RP sandboxes? I LOVE those!

 

[konabwo]

Any recommendations for RP sandboxes? I LOVE those!

same here hehe. well , probably advisable to start with developed qsp ones (GL, SoaB, Big kuyash)
u dont have many posts-so just go latest updates , pick tags for rp and sbx and sort by likes.