To anyone else who may have had this issue I leave this post and reply up for you, after deleting the game and redownloading everything the issue fixed itself.
Then write your own story.
ah yes the good old "writing my own story"
I don't think that this was his point, criticize all you want, but I think he was just talking about how the story progresses and hints at future events, and I see where he comes from, but, the thing is I feel like the war should be an act 2 type of thing, and he should have reserved act 3 for the finale of the story, I'm not saying that he can't make a good story with the setup he made, I just think that the structure is just off, but that's my opinion
Thank you for getting it. To quote Jack Black from the first Goosebumps movie, though: " Every story ever told can be broken down into three parts. The beginning, The middle, and The Twist." And that was the start of Chapter 3, Morgana fearing your power and the organization recognizing your threat actually team up, because they've both had dealings with your alternate selves. And because their own goals are WHOLELY incompatible with each other, they immediately turn on each other when they think you're dead.
You're not criticizing though. You're bitching. You don't like how the story that Arc wrote is turning out. If this was a movie, you would walk out. If this was a book, you'd stop reading it. Now, if you have a valid criticism like "The UI rework that Arc developed in the most recent update is broken, and makes it incredibly difficult to navigate," then YES. You are criticizing the game. If we were in...chapter 8 and MC and Gramps were still plotting and trying to set things up and there was no actual progress on that front, "After all this time, I would expect the metaplot to progress by now," that would ALSO be a valid criticism. However, what you are doing is "I don't like the story's meta plot but instead of ignoring the thread I wanna complain that the story didn't progress how I wanted." Additionally, you aren't in the review section. You are in the general chat section.
Yeah me too but as it stands I guess he will always have the upper hand on us because we will never get to lay a hand on her... In any way.
Wrong. He is releasing things, updates, statuses, wallpapers, so he's fulfilling his obligation to Subscribestar. So they aren't supporting him for nothing.
Well, why dont we let him speak for himself - which he newer do here - and as said on first page:
Where are you from 60K a year is not poverty level jeez
what am i bitching about? for complaining about act 3 dark deep glomy? should just focus on act 2? im not attacking the author with those word, criticism is feedback, not competition.
Depends entirely where you are -- U.S. in Hawaii, or parts of California or New York it most certainly is. Living wage in Silicon Valley (aka Santa Clara county) is north of six figures $U.S. for a family of four -- not kidding. While that's above the poverty line, it doesn't leave a lot to spare. Housing + Medical are more than $60k just by themselves.
Yeah Individual areas may Cost out the a** however Poverty level for the US is well Below 30K a year I should know I made good money as a Machinist and as a Computer repair tech and still was below 30K a year most of my life.
Yeah, umm... buddy that's not patronage at this point, people who pay him are supporting him for the game, shit that he's releasing like artwork, wallpapers, etc. are just extras, and if he doesn't release anything game related, he's basically running a scam with extra steps, lobesod has a point here
