Okay, and how would you have done the corruption then, if not by repeating scenes? It made sense to me that the more you fuck her the more she accepts that she loves getting fucked, and the more addicted she becomes to you. But as always, I'm taking feedback. I'm writing some more corruption content right now, so hearing about other ways to corrupt the girls may be quite valuable at the moment.
It's less the fucking and more the buildup to the fucking. Lacing her treats with venom leading to the first fuck is fine as an instigating event to awaken her to her suppressed lust (I would've preferred for us to force ourself onto her and her eventually submitting in order to tend to her uncontrolled lust instead her just asking us though) but I would have liked it more if the stuff after was more gradual. Like the tease scene, it follows the same general actions with a change here and there in her reaction as her Lust meter is build up. I would have liked it more if we could have teased her in more ways like fondling her, brushing your package (or breasts? I don't know if there's a lesbian option) against her, massaging her, kissing her, etc.
In general I would have liked more verbal and physical resistance from her. She allows the tease scene to happen from beginning to end without stopping you before you can change it from a massage to something more lewd. Instead of the different options like "behind counter" and "against door" being blanked out, I think it would have been better if you let them be available but have different results depending on her lust meter. Like if we chose the blowjob she would refuse at first but eventually go from letting your dick linger in her face to eventually sucking you off. Once you unlock the blowjob you get options to either dismiss the customer, try to tend to his order, or just reveal her to him. In my playthrough, I avoided revealing her at first because I thought it would end the BJ if I did that too soon but on replay I can do it on the very first time without repercussion like her biting your dick before you could. Stuff like that would have made the corruption to me feel more...natural? At first she blows you as long as you get rid of the audience, then she allows it if you tend the store normally, and finally gets so into it that you can reveal her without her stopping. A process like that I fell would have flowed better.
Now, this is more of a sensitive topic but the vibe I got was that she was an actual milf with kids and probably a hubby of some sort. Maybe I read that wrong and it was just playing to the mommy fetish, I dunno. If she actual is, I would have liked more references to her kids/beau as reasons for her resistance to play up the pure houswife image she's trying to uphold. That kinda veers into cheating/NTR territory so I get why you wouldn't want to go there but I do think it would up the feeling of corruption.
I dunno, this might be way beyond the scope you were going for or too much work for one NPC but it's just the things I had on my mind going through her content. I do appreciate the endeavor to add more corruption to the game, lord knows we hardly get any in a game with it in the title, and her scenes were still hot. It's just the in-betweens I have an issue with.
And doubly so because Brienne and Arona are my faves. Shit's like the grooming temple and mama wolf. It's like the writers don't realize they've built a grey blob of a world and keep trying to narrate it in black and white terms. Just, discuss penis in vagina and leave it at that.
