Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.15] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[Lord Kentus]

If you read my post completely you would have noticed that I spoke of the "initial reaction of Kinu" and criticized what happens next. It should have been the trigger for a reconcilliation and understanding arc and that's where TOBS fucked it all (again).

As I said a long time ago in this very thread, the best Kinu is the one that doesn't exist.

Life is just pain and suffering for her so the best timeline is the one where she is never born.

 

[Quintilus]

As I said a long time ago in this very thread, the best Kinu is the one that doesn't exist.

Life is just pain and suffering for her so the best timeline is the one where she is never born.

"For her"?

How about us?

 

[Biostar]

even in scenes where you can tell he is trying to actually invoke something vaguely positive he can't help himself and pull away from the MC to gush over his precious NPC's.

I still remember our "date" with Meira. What a hack.

 

[glygoch]

If you read my post completely you would have noticed that I spoke of the "initial reaction of Kinu" and criticized what happens next. It should have been the trigger for a reconcilliation and understanding arc and that's where TOBS fucked it all (again).

Never said you didn't, my point was that the quality of writing is irrelevant if he writes "feel bad" stories. The point of the whole story is to make you feel guilty if you care for your fictional daughter. I personally deleted the orb from existence back when that was possible as soon as I heard about this spite project. No point running head against a brick wall.

 

[Mr.Hide]

Their viewpoint is conflict.
I re-read the story and feel awkward in the Fox family but I understand the plot.
Perhaps I am also an Asian, so knew very well the conflict in one family and felt it was normal.
Both Kinu feel a degree of dislike toward either Kiyoko or Komari because they feel the latter oppress them. (And the Asian way to express their dislikes is indifference toward their target)
It's right to some degree but because the parents have no choice but to groom a proper successor for the Otomo family.
Kiyoko values human relationships and how to exercise political ability while Komari worships god and the fertile land.
When your daughter/future head shows the ability that suits their taste or shows the demerit with they dislike.
That's how their awkward relationship comes in.
-----Komari is loyal to Kiyoko but more than a hundred years have passed, and Komari who suffered and faced numerous hardships would have different opinions.
Komari may think about the family serving Kinu to help the Shoujo demerit as the goddess of fertility while Kiyoko doesn't care about god or otherworldly power and pursues versatility over rigidness

*Shoujo fears her mother and doesn't want to be like her, Hime feels the "old-hags" annoying and ineffective.
They feel that adults oppress them and show dislike

**Well, this is my opinion from my experience.

 

[DipYourFingersOnMyAss]

Their viewpoint is conflict.
I re-read the story and feel awkward in the Fox family but I understand the plot.
Perhaps I am also an Asian, so knew very well the conflict in one family and felt it was normal.
Both Kinu feel a degree of dislike toward either Kiyoko or Komari because they feel the latter oppress them. (And the Asian way to express their dislikes is indifference toward their target)
It's right to some degree but because the parents have no choice but to groom a proper successor for the Otomo family.
Kiyoko values human relationships and how to exercise political ability while Komari worships god and the fertile land.
When your daughter/future head shows the ability that suits their taste or shows the demerit with they dislike.
That's how their awkward relationship comes in.
-----Komari is loyal to Kiyoko but more than a hundred years have passed, and Komari who suffered and faced numerous hardships would have different opinions.
Komari may think about the family serving Kinu to help the Shoujo demerit as the goddess of fertility while Kiyoko doesn't care about god or otherworldly power and pursues versatility over rigidness

*Shoujo fears her mother and doesn't want to be like her, Hime feels the "old-hags" annoying and ineffective.
They feel that adults oppress them and show dislike

**Well, this is my opinion from my experience.

Nice try Mr.Observer

 

[Shurouga]

While would Kinu fear Kiyoko her own mother ?

 

[Thatguymercy]

It's crazy how every 30 pages we gotta have about 10 dedicated to shitting on Tobs on how he handled kinu.
Either old people are making new accounts to spark an argument or the writing is just that bad.

 

[Comiies]

Their viewpoint is conflict.
I re-read the story and feel awkward in the Fox family but I understand the plot.
Perhaps I am also an Asian, so knew very well the conflict in one family and felt it was normal.
Both Kinu feel a degree of dislike toward either Kiyoko or Komari because they feel the latter oppress them. (And the Asian way to express their dislikes is indifference toward their target)
It's right to some degree but because the parents have no choice but to groom a proper successor for the Otomo family.
Kiyoko values human relationships and how to exercise political ability while Komari worships god and the fertile land.
When your daughter/future head shows the ability that suits their taste or shows the demerit with they dislike.
That's how their awkward relationship comes in.
-----Komari is loyal to Kiyoko but more than a hundred years have passed, and Komari who suffered and faced numerous hardships would have different opinions.
Komari may think about the family serving Kinu to help the Shoujo demerit as the goddess of fertility while Kiyoko doesn't care about god or otherworldly power and pursues versatility over rigidness

*Shoujo fears her mother and doesn't want to be like her, Hime feels the "old-hags" annoying and ineffective.
They feel that adults oppress them and show dislike

**Well, this is my opinion from my experience.

Shut up glowie

 

[Quintilus]

Nice try Mr.Observer

I stil able to read and understand him tho
Unless tobs uses chatgpt for his fakes.

 

[MoneyMan181]

Their viewpoint is conflict.
I re-read the story and feel awkward in the Fox family but I understand the plot.
Perhaps I am also an Asian, so knew very well the conflict in one family and felt it was normal.
Both Kinu feel a degree of dislike toward either Kiyoko or Komari because they feel the latter oppress them. (And the Asian way to express their dislikes is indifference toward their target)
It's right to some degree but because the parents have no choice but to groom a proper successor for the Otomo family.
Kiyoko values human relationships and how to exercise political ability while Komari worships god and the fertile land.
When your daughter/future head shows the ability that suits their taste or shows the demerit with they dislike.
That's how their awkward relationship comes in.
-----Komari is loyal to Kiyoko but more than a hundred years have passed, and Komari who suffered and faced numerous hardships would have different opinions.
Komari may think about the family serving Kinu to help the Shoujo demerit as the goddess of fertility while Kiyoko doesn't care about god or otherworldly power and pursues versatility over rigidness

*Shoujo fears her mother and doesn't want to be like her, Hime feels the "old-hags" annoying and ineffective.
They feel that adults oppress them and show dislike

**Well, this is my opinion from my experience.

That's great and all but can you tell me why I should give a shit about any of that?

 

[Based Department]

i still say the retarded ass kinuquests are the worst parts about her

 

[Wrynn13]

We have to fill the time between complaining about lackluster updates somehow, shitting on Tobs just seems to come up the most. Personally I blame Savin more because with competent management even Tobs shit could have been made tolerable.

 

[Tripfriend]

It's crazy how every 30 pages we gotta have about 10 dedicated to shitting on Tobs on how he handled kinu.
Either old people are making new accounts to spark an argument or the writing is just that bad.
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I like being angry.

 

[Sasquatch421]

I like being angry.

I prefer horny myself. Gives a new meaning to Sasquatch smash.

 

[Quintilus]

I like being angry.

 

[atomicp]

I like being angry.

Same. I can be either depressed or entertained. I ain't getting more depressed.

 

[sugouxxx]

Their viewpoint is conflict.
I re-read the story and feel awkward in the Fox family but I understand the plot.
Perhaps I am also an Asian, so knew very well the conflict in one family and felt it was normal.
Both Kinu feel a degree of dislike toward either Kiyoko or Komari because they feel the latter oppress them. (And the Asian way to express their dislikes is indifference toward their target)
It's right to some degree but because the parents have no choice but to groom a proper successor for the Otomo family.
Kiyoko values human relationships and how to exercise political ability while Komari worships god and the fertile land.
When your daughter/future head shows the ability that suits their taste or shows the demerit with they dislike.
That's how their awkward relationship comes in.
-----Komari is loyal to Kiyoko but more than a hundred years have passed, and Komari who suffered and faced numerous hardships would have different opinions.
Komari may think about the family serving Kinu to help the Shoujo demerit as the goddess of fertility while Kiyoko doesn't care about god or otherworldly power and pursues versatility over rigidness

*Shoujo fears her mother and doesn't want to be like her, Hime feels the "old-hags" annoying and ineffective.
They feel that adults oppress them and show dislike

**Well, this is my opinion from my experience.

Wow, so basically ToBS successful made kitsune, one of the oldest furrybait, coomerbait, anthrobait who being loved by everyone because their playfulness disliked by everyone because he projects how much irredeemable cunt their species. Based him who think bat soup are normal food

 

[Thatguymercy]

Their viewpoint is conflict.
I re-read the story and feel awkward in the Fox family but I understand the plot.
Perhaps I am also an Asian, so knew very well the conflict in one family and felt it was normal.
Both Kinu feel a degree of dislike toward either Kiyoko or Komari because they feel the latter oppress them. (And the Asian way to express their dislikes is indifference toward their target)
It's right to some degree but because the parents have no choice but to groom a proper successor for the Otomo family.
Kiyoko values human relationships and how to exercise political ability while Komari worships god and the fertile land.
When your daughter/future head shows the ability that suits their taste or shows the demerit with they dislike.
That's how their awkward relationship comes in.
-----Komari is loyal to Kiyoko but more than a hundred years have passed, and Komari who suffered and faced numerous hardships would have different opinions.
Komari may think about the family serving Kinu to help the Shoujo demerit as the goddess of fertility while Kiyoko doesn't care about god or otherworldly power and pursues versatility over rigidness

*Shoujo fears her mother and doesn't want to be like her, Hime feels the "old-hags" annoying and ineffective.
They feel that adults oppress them and show dislike

**Well, this is my opinion from my experience.

Now you could be legit but your post radiates a certain something...idk like a glow perhaps? I just never heard of an actual "ASIAN"person relating to Tobs weeabo fantasy writing.

 

[Darak123]

So did I.

Where is it? You can't keep saying without delivering damn it. That's the devs job. Where is my fics. WHERE IS THIS? NAKANO WHERE?