- May 14, 2017
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Some writers feel like your character 's just a mouthpiece to move the plot along. Your character doesn't even bring up the obvious counter of "what would she have done if Gwyn and Garret joined the cult?" Would she have been so nonchalant if somebody killed them just because they were consorting with cult.And both had the same following answer. So. Where are the choices?
. From a developing PoV is just flow chart laziness and poor implementing skills.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
What makes this worse is that Bubs tries to canonize that some members are brainwashed or tricked, so clashing writers make her come off even worse