Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.35] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[muschi26]

What exactly you didnt liked?

I’m not sure what you’re asking me. What I didn’t like about my own writing?

 

[harem.king]

And furthermo-
Wait...
Excuse me?
Wild Life makes HOW much? How? Did it get a major update that turned it into something besides an animation viewer?

I want to grow up to be a patreon milker
2 days a year of work for millions of dollars a year in salary

 

[WeebLoop]

Perhaps, (if they accept my work) my plan is to ask for control of Clementine's character and write a marriage expansion for her. Which will expand all her content and add more. Just hopeful thinking right now but that's the plan if it works out and of course if they allow me to do marriage content for her.

That would be amazing dude.
The way you wrote that pregnancy event and the after story with the kids is too wholesomely, a great slice of life fitting of her.
Sex scenes were great as well, I liked how you tried to expand that assertive side of hers, but in the pregnant sex sometimes it felt like if the PC was fucking Gwyn (not complaining tho)

 

[Skandranon]

I want to grow up to be a patreon milker
2 days a year of work for millions of dollars a year in salary

Ehhh, Wild Life is very impressive for what it is. I don't doubt that a buttload of work is going into it, as well as technical skill, I certainly wouldn't call it milking.

But it's still, as is, a showcase. A very expensive tech demo.

When I think of games with fantastic promise that don't have a tenth of the funding...man.PC.

Sex scenes were great as well, I liked how you tried to expand that assertive side of hers, but in the pregnant sex sometimes it felt like if the PC was fucking Gwyn (not complaining tho)

I also feel like a few of the other attempts at Clem were slightly off, too, before they disappeared. There's a tendency to write her as pretty subby overall, when she's actually pretty assertive and gung-ho most of the time, just not as sexually experienced as the pc.

 

[Wrynn13]

Wha? Clem is super subby. Subs don't have to be doormats outside the bedroom.

 

[Deleted member 1660801]

Sex scenes were great as well, I liked how you tried to expand that assertive side of hers, but in the pregnant sex sometimes it felt like if the PC was fucking Gwyn (not complaining tho)

I also feel like a few of the other attempts at Clem were slightly off, too, before they disappeared. There's a tendency to write her as pretty subby overall, when she's actually pretty assertive and gung-ho most of the time, just not as sexually experienced as the pc.

I'll keep this in mind if I write for her again, The idea was to keep her submission but be more assertive when being affectionate with the player.
Although it is hard to keep 100% accuracy, after all, I didn't create Clementine.

 

[Skandranon]

Wha? Clem is super subby. Subs don't have to be doormats outside the bedroom.

Eh, I'd said she comes off more inexperienced than subby in the bedroom, but her dialogue is more what I meant anyway by "overall".

The last doc I saw for her had her as stutters and blushing constantly when talking to the player a lot, which didn't really match most of her behavior except when she was asking about shearing.

 

[WeebLoop]

There's a tendency to write her as pretty subby overall, when she's actually pretty assertive and gung-ho most of the time, just not as sexually experienced as the pc.

Well, Clementine indeed looks quite subby during her sex scenes, but if you pay attention to her Chit-chat dialogs you can notice that the reason comes from she being pretty reserved and inexperienced in that field; as well as her nervous/timid personality.

During the shearing event you can see how proactive she can be if she were more confident. Even more when she gets conscious of her being aggressiveness and then returns momentarily to her stuttering and shy behavior, and then again becomes aggressive once the desire(love) makes her forget about the rest so she only focuses on the PC. But there is the hint that she also likes to be toyed with (specially if the PC has a big penis), so I'd call her a switch haha

 

[harem.king]

Perhaps, (if they accept my work) my plan is to ask for control of Clementine's character and write a marriage expansion for her. Which will expand all her content and add more. Just hopeful thinking right now but that's the plan if it works out and of course if they allow me to do marriage content for her.

Spare yourself the pain and don't do it man.
It is an extremely toxic work environment, and will tie you to it via sunk cost fallacy.
Plus they will own your writing.

Better to write on your own or as part of a healthier team

 

[Biostar]

Spare yourself the pain and don't do it man.
It is an extremely toxic work environment, and will tie you to it via sunk cost fallacy.
Plus they will own your writing.

Better to write on your own or as part of a healthier team

Quiet you, I need more writers on this thing making what I want besides Wsan.

 

[Deleted member 1660801]

Spare yourself the pain and don't do it man.
It is an extremely toxic work environment, and will tie you to it via sunk cost fallacy.
Plus they will own your writing.

Better to write on your own or as part of a healthier team

Eh, I think your concerns are misplaced. I asked Savin for permission to write for Clementine, he was kind enough to let me, and Jstar went out of his way to help me commission art. Hell, Jstar even DM'ed me on Discord so he could help further. They didn't have to do that yet they did.

While it would be nice to write my own world and not have so many restrictions, It feels disingenuous to label them "toxic" when they have been so kind and helpful to me.

 

[MoneyMan181]

Eh, I think your concerns are misplaced. I asked Savin for permission to write for Clementine, he was kind enough to let me, and Jstar went out of his way to help me commission art. Hell, Jstar even DM'ed me on Discord so he could help further. They didn't have to do that yet they did.

While it would be nice to write my own world and not have so many restrictions, It feels disingenuous to label them "toxic" when they have been so kind and helpful to me.

The only person being kind to you in this circumstance is Jstar really. I mean this in the absolute nicest way possible, but being given permission to write for a character that would otherwise just be rotting away is not exactly the most gracious thing. You're essentially giving him free labor to contribute towards his product. There is no reason Savin wouldn't just accept that unless the quality is noticeably worse than other content.

Going by some of the discord screenshots on here, I'd say it looks like a shitty workplace environment if you're trying to seriously be a part of it. Then again maybe those were just outliers, but I get the feeling they weren't. Regardless, if you plan on writing for any length of time, I would recommend going off and doing your own thing once you feel confident enough in your ability to tell a story. People naturally flock to quality content and it's never good for a writer to be shackled down writing the same thing over and over again for extended periods of time.

 

[Wrynn13]

I'll keep this in mind if I write for her again, The idea was to keep her submission but be more assertive when being affectionate with the player.
Although it is hard to keep 100% accuracy, after all, I didn't create Clementine.

Do please try to keep her submissive, the game has so few good subs.

 

[Deleted member 1660801]

Do please try to keep her submissive, the game has so few good subs.

I'll be sure to focus on that more if I write the marriage content.

The only person being kind to you in this circumstance is Jstar really. I mean this in the absolute nicest way possible, but being given permission to write for a character that would otherwise just be rotting away is not exactly the most gracious thing. You're essentially giving him free labor to contribute towards his product. There is no reason Savin wouldn't just accept that unless the quality is noticeably worse than other content.

Going by some of the discord screenshots on here, I'd say it looks like a shitty workplace environment if you're trying to seriously be a part of it. Then again maybe those were just outliers, but I get the feeling they weren't. Regardless, if you plan on writing for any length of time, I would recommend going off and doing your own thing once you feel confident enough in your ability to tell a story. People naturally flock to quality content and it's never good for a writer to be shackled down writing the same thing over and over again for extended periods of time.

Fair enough, although I don't know any other text-based games I could write for. Coc2 seems like my best bet for right now. (I also really want to write that marriage content for Clementine)

 

[atomicp]

Please give us a loving relationship based in mutual love, respect, handholding and headpats.

 

[MoneyMan181]

Fair enough, although I don't know any other text-based games I could write for. Coc2 seems like my best bet for right now. (I also really want to write that marriage content for Clementine)

Doesn't have to exclusively be text-based games. Could be any genre as long as you enjoy you writing it. Or you could just stick to AO3 or a similar site and just grow an audience there. Hell, you could write literally whatever you want and have it be successful. I write shitty hentai captions and got a commission even. If I can make any amount of money doing that, you can by doing literally anything(much more likely if it's porn).

 

[Comiies]

Doesn't have to exclusively be text-based games. Could be any genre as long as you enjoy you writing it. Or you could just stick to AO3 or a similar site and just grow an audience there. Hell, you could write literally whatever you want and have it be successful. I write shitty hentai captions and got a commission even. If I can make any amount of money doing that, you can by doing literally anything(much more likely if it's porn).

The coomer market is a very lucrative one

 

[harem.king]

Fair enough, although I don't know any other text-based games I could write for. Coc2 seems like my best bet for right now. (I also really want to write that marriage content for Clementine)

Most text based games here are made in twine, an open source engine that is fairly easy to use

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here is a 5 minute video explaining how to use the engine

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there is a 50 minute video explaining it in depth

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you can be your own boss. With donations via subscribestar and patreon

 

[Quintilus]

I’m not sure what you’re asking me. What I didn’t like about my own writing?

Yes.

 

[Biostar]

Could just be me but I think it's pretty silly to tell an amateur to just go off and make a whole new project without sufficient experience first. There are so many dead projects because people bit off more than they could chew.