Please give us a loving relationship based in mutual love, respect, handholding and headpats.
Literally this, no need to make her into just another slut or give into the whole submission/dominance thing. If you could make the PC actually feel understood and loved (and not just for their huge penis), that would be a huge middle finger to the rest of the game. Just because she's not in the lead doesn't mean she needs to be a "sub" or whatever. Maybe have her pay attention to some things you do in game.
In fact, you could make it so that she refuses to have penetrative sex until you're small enough to fit her, or make it into an inverse relationship - smaller is better (up to a certain point, obviously). That too would be a new one for the game.
-system similar to Kiyoko's tails, she gets thicker and busty the more kids she has. (toggleable)
Oh god, don't steal this awful idea from the other characters, Clementine's proportions are already pushing it as is. I think this game has enough synthol monsters with broken backs due to having most of their bodyweight in their chests. I mean, am I the only one that noticed that Moira's characters don't have an ass? The bloated parts on the lower body are just two thighs that extend and connect in the back. I saw this first on Elthara, now I can't unsee it anywhere.
-house expansion (build clementine a bigger house)
-More pregnancy stuff
-face sitting
-Milking/Lactation
-system similar to Kiyoko's tails, she gets thicker and busty the more kids she has. (toggleable)
-More children interactions
-Standing sex
-Wooljob? (idk how this would work)
-Wedding event
-Rut content
-Dates
-House system- Clementine moves around the house (e.g. she will be sleeping in her room at night hours and during day hours she will be in the kitchen or doing chores in the living room.)
-nursing content
-Cuddlefuck
-More options with Clementine (kissing, handholding, headpats (etc), more conversations)
-Anal? (I'm not a fan of anal so idk if I could do it justice)
The rest seems fine, as long as it's in character, I feel like "Rut content" in particular might get out of hand quickly.
Heh, I don’t think I’m that much of a lost cause when it comes to word choice, but to me what makes erotica hot is what goes on in the
inside, not the outside, and that’s where I have trouble. You can call it a penis, a meat rod, a manhood, or even a one-eyed snake, describe it as being turgid, swollen, hard as frozen banana, or what have you—that’s still nothing to do with
emotion.
The key is to prompt the reader's imagination. Even if I'm just looking at a single CG of some kind, I'm already subconsciously thinking about the situation and story behind it. For example, instead of saying someone is nervous, you can give hints towards it - Are they fidgeting? Avoiding eye contact? Tail activity? Or freezes like in Clementine's case, if I remember correctly. What I'm trying to say is that I think the best porn actually happens in your head, so maybe looking up 200 different alternatives for the word "penis" isn't the right way. In fact, you might leave no room for the reader's imagination when you overdescribe what's happening. I'm no writer, it's just something I picked up on.
One thing I wanted to write was making the virginity loss more explicit rather than just implied. Do you have plans for that?
This would also be nice, but in general, I think she needs a better relationship start, as right now you just walk up to her home and say "Sex?" and she just casually accepts. Yes, I know that's basically most characters in the game.
