Jbuster
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Thanks man, smut and fight scenes are the one thing I can't write at all, I usually just write the aftermath and then add stuff here and there to pad the whole thingInteresting stuff, but I'd a recommend i'm looking into fixing up your action scenes. It's not your fault though, your fresh. Action scenes are one of the more difficult stuff to actually pull off in writing. I know, I have actually been trying it. I'm gonna link a video that's really good at teaching you to write an action scene. Action scenes also translate smut scenes as well. Because a really good doujin writer by the name of ShindoL, said in an interview years ago that smut scenes and action seems are basically the same thing. You just have things a bit more lewder.
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This Tuber is one the best at teaching writing imo, dude is a resource.
Fantasy sex slavery is being tired because your master/mistress had so much sex with you, it's unreal, but yeah, the few times you see them suffering is either at the orc camp or with Hirrud as a vile smear campaign, even the idea of changing Arona and changing the orcs through her has some merit, she's going to be your puppet war chief and she's supposed to spread your vision, but what vision can that be when almost every other place is the same?I wonder if it's even entirely that. He confirms the first part of wanting people to give him their ideas. I think he wants people to do all the work for him but only if he can benefit. He wants everyone else's OCs, writing, ideas, all that good shit so he can slap a backers tag on it when it comes in at first to encourage more people giving him money and claim ownership so if it's popular he can feel good about himself instead. Of course the big question is which is stronger, Savin's greed or his ego?
After witnessing the subgenre of "Komi in depraved as fuck situations" I hope not. Not sure about Nasu though.
Yeah but that would require admitting to himself that all he really accomplished was making a generic fantasy setting with a furry flavor that exists solely as a platform for him to be paid to play god-king dungeon master. He's the only dev I know of that get's turbo mad anytime modding is brought up.
My heart goes out to them cause that's an ever growing list. They're doing the lord's work over there.
I think the most we get is a throwaway line from Leorah when she's arguing with Cait that their old home sucks. TBH the fantasy slavery wouldn't be as big a deal on its own if it wasn't surrounded by all the other red flags he likes to wave around. The orcs are easier to complain about since they're physically there and it seems the developer intended route is to be besties with them.
Streisand Effect Forever.
I really wish they would stop adding worldbuilding to try and fix the creepy details instead of letting them be creepy details that make the world darker, don't know, some stuff should feel dangerous and evil and make you question if everyone on your side is someone you really want there with you
I know the Rent a Girlfriend bro is full on board with the ntr mindset, he's been on a crusade using his self insert to cuck his self insert stealing his fantasy GF