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DID NO ONE SEE ME LAUGH AT HIS COMMENT? SARCASM? HELLO!!
Ah, Over there? Dude, I was born in Miami and am also a proud Canadian. As as for my broken English just because I spell nite, night or color, colour don't mean my English is broken.
If we look at the line you "Corrected"
Kinda is a contraction of kind of. You should try to avoid using contractions and abbreviation when writing it's less messy. Also if your writing things like 5000 word essays not using them helps towards the word count.
When you removed the word "text" from the sentence you removed what kind of line I was speaking of. Now "lines" could mean lines of code. Why does it matter? Well in my line of work context is king and even if it redundant using the subjects name is always the best way to keep people from getting confused. (IE: He picked it up and struck her ~ Mr. Sanders picked up the stick and struck Ms. Sanders)
Intent and purpose are interchangeable so why you need to use it I do not understand.
Changing "he wrote" to "his writing" is kind of silly because he's already written the line of text. He's not currently writing the text so why you felt like changing it to the present tense from the past tense is beyond me.
I know, I know I'm being a dick with skin a brittle a dead leaves and a thin a rice paper. What can I say I a hyper sensitive guy who's here for porn and to have fun. If I wanted humiliation I'd play a humiliation game.
Edit: I'm not gonna stop commenting as much as you want me to.