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In their defense I did deliberately write it so as to get them to react that way.
I basically designed an innocuous scenario but worded it in a very dark way to see if I could get them to pick up on the tone and not the underlying content. It's good to see that my old writing skills are not completely lost with age and neglect.
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Okay, I get your implied intent, but I'm not sure how someone completely going against their own character by purposefully attempting to turn someone (regardless of how annoying they are) into a quivering mass of eternal paranoia and branding themself publicly as the up-and-coming evil overlord is "innocuous" ...In their defense I did deliberately write it so as to get them to react that way.
I basically designed an innocuous scenario but worded it in a very dark way to see if I could get them to pick up on the tone and not the underlying content. It's good to see that my old writing skills are not completely lost with age and neglect.
I know right. It's the over the top description of the situation that makes it sound way, way worse than it actually is. And if you just accidentally neglect the fact this game paints the MC as chaotic good it suddenly sounds like something strait out of a horror story. It's only once you step back and think about it in context that you'd go "wait a moment".
Except it wasn't very dark. Just unhinged and incredibly cringe.In their defense I did deliberately write it so as to get them to react that way.
I basically designed an innocuous scenario but worded it in a very dark way to see if I could get them to pick up on the tone and not the underlying content. It's good to see that my old writing skills are not completely lost with age and neglect.
Hinges are there to be shaken and twisted until they pop off. Than you laugh at their inadequacy. Meanwhile the people inside the house look at you with a worried expression on their face that you can't tell if it stems from being angry at you or worried for you.
You should try it some times. It's quite the feeling. Well, unless you are american. Like I think they shoot trespassers there.
This from the March 31st Dev Log:
So, getting back to 0.9, I'm hoping to release it May 5th - but given the length and the work I'm still putting in to get 0.8.1 finished, it could end up being pushed back a week or two. Having said that, I don't want to keep you waiting, because I think it's a really good one!
Cheers!!
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Well, there's nothing very wrong with a little darkness in fiction. Except that going there so quickly would not give you anywhere else to go afterwards.
Perhaps an alternative route with Rachel could be that you somehow use a connection you have towards the end of the content to take away her position as head of the student council, give it to yourself, and make her follow you around and set her meaningless rules that she will follow just because she respects authority. Then she can happen across various things you do with other girls which stir up feelings that maybe she is missing out on something.
If there is a character who is set up nicely for a 'power play' style of relationship, it's Catherine.
Perhaps an alternative route with Rachel could be that you somehow use a connection you have towards the end of the content to take away her position as head of the student council, give it to yourself, and make her follow you around and set her meaningless rules that she will follow just because she respects authority. Then she can happen across various things you do with other girls which stir up feelings that maybe she is missing out on something.
If there is a character who is set up nicely for a 'power play' style of relationship, it's Catherine.
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Rachel needs A Yamaha Vibrator with a Kick start strapped to her Ass. RRing-Da-Ding-ding-Da-Ding.
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Hey guys, a very short dev log this time!
In the last one I mentioned that a lot of my time was going into 0.8.1 and the improvements to the earlier content - well that's now complete, and it went out for the public release last weekend (I also updated the post here, if any of you want to grab it!)
That leads me onto my current task: rendering 0.9. Progress is going quite quickly so far, with the current render count sitting around 300. I'm thinking the total should be in the 1100-1200 range, which should put the release on May 12th if everything goes well. But as most of you probably know at this point, I have a habit of underestimating, so we'll just have to wait and see.
So with all of my time being spent on the render grind, that's all there is to say really. Though I will just add, I'm really looking forward to this update! There are a few revelations for some of the characters that I think will finally show you a bit of where their stories are going, and I'm eager to hear all of your thoughts!
There'll be one last dev log before 0.9 on the 28th, at which point I should be able to give you all a more concrete release date. Until then, thank you all for supporting Cosy Cafe, as always I really appreciate it!
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On most VNs, if you go to the OP and look for something that says "Fan Sig" or "Fan Sign", it will link you to what's available, assuming this is what you mean, and not an actual banner for you to make a sig from.
For this VN, it's here.
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