Konrad Simon

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All good, just wanted to make you aware of how it's coming across in the story as a reader with the MC never really reciprocating. Comes across as selfish, not really maledom.
Odd. It doesn't come across as selfish to me at all. I suppose it might if it were established that one or more of the LIs particularly craved it and he didn't care, but that doesn't seem to be the case.
 
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