Konrad Simon

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All good, just wanted to make you aware of how it's coming across in the story as a reader with the MC never really reciprocating. Comes across as selfish, not really maledom.
Odd. It doesn't come across as selfish to me at all. I suppose it might if it were established that one or more of the LIs particularly craved it and he didn't care, but that doesn't seem to be the case.
 

Havik79

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Sep 5, 2019
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My life has become total shit, and apathy has set in fucking hard, but this game is probably the only thing that gives me any happiness, so thanks to the dev for that.

It was an enjoyable update for the most part. I felt the Sara stuff fell a bit flat, but thanks to the writing, I have come around to liking her. But wow, I was not expecting to have a charge of heart with Cat. Now I want to help her, if only to make sure her little sisters have a better life, and naked Hanna, yes, please, more of that.
 
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