- Dec 12, 2021
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It might be due to the title being transfered from Unreal but you could use a few transition placements.. or time cards that make the reader aware that time has passed.. the Qi test with serena jumps a couple of weeks and its as if its still part of the same time period.. Again.. Not a massive issue but in the interest of the title being better this might help.. sound effects too lol.. a few times the scene hinted that a noise should have alerted someone but you just click on through without really noticing