Dom route is a little disappointing. I still feel like I'm the one driving the action and not her. It becomes really apparent at the glory hole. If you pick both "let's leave right now" options it is game over. She should tell you to sit down and shut the fuck up or just leave and you have the options to either watch or wait for her outside. Even in the club when she is dancing you should be able to shake your head no and she should just ignore you. The dialogue could be different when you get home from the first time at the club as well. On the Dom route she should be more excited about the experience instead of mad for you letting it happen, then you should have the option to confront her about it or just let it go without saying anything.
I'm feeling for the Dom route the negative answers where you tell her to hold off on doing something should be the correct answer and she should either argue with you or disregard what you say and do what she wants anyway. What might also be something different for the Dom route is to not have game overs, but have a submissive range you need to keep within. If you just let her do whatever she wants and never object she eventually starts leaving you behind and instead of a game over the game continues, but most of the choices you would normally be able to make are gone and the game just basically plays itself. Then instead of going out with her and see what happens you just get a scene of her leaving for the night, you sit around the house waiting, and her just her returning either late at night (or the next day, or a few days later, with perhaps just a few text messages from her during that time). Then you have to see if you can convince her to tell you what happened and if successful get a slideshow of the scenes everyone else would get if they had chosen a different path and gone with her. If she is Dom but you are a more challenging with her, then those arguments usually end with her putting you in your place but you still coming along with her anyway. Basically if you still have some fight in you she brings you along to humiliate you as you are still a bit of a challenge, if you completely give up and let her do whatever then she just gets bored with you and leaves you behind.