lol mc is a nerdy loser, hard to take him as a alpha player who gets all the girls.
you tried being a dik?? that mc is actually good looking and fits bad boy jock archetype.
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you tried being a dik?? that mc is actually good looking and fits bad boy jock archetype.
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MC good how Beta! NTR scenes best) Alpha be bad(((((((((((
search for compressed, youll find what u search in the last page pilgrimCulture Shock [Ch. 2 v1.0 SE] [King of lust]
NOTE: WT/Gallery Code included
COMPRESSED:
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by the way it was compressed on 10th of july
2 months have already passed,
any news on the update?
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Status Update
I am almost finished with Like ntr day34. with 10% day35 completed as well. The 3d guys is creating good animation, I am having no problem...
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rest behind paywall.
Next update status of chapter 3 v0.5 Rendering 35% Writing 80% Coding 00%
Slow as always
Slow as always
%35 in 2 months
%100 in 5 months 27 days
so why is the extra guy hired?
%100 in 5 months 27 days
so why is the extra guy hired?
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to impress supporters.
- Oct 27, 2017
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Was the writing still done by a monkey on a typewriter this time? Some of the dialogue in the last few chapters has been abominable, like would it kill them to run a basic spell checker? Typo's, grammatical issues, etc.
Real quotes from this update, verbatim:
Tracey: "I must tell now, i am not that experinced in all of this these."
Marcus: "Will Never."
MC: "All credit marcus Let see what more he has to offer.. HAHAHA..."
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That asides, I find the latest updates less enjoyable even outside of the plummeting writing quality. It isn't just that it's bad writing on a technical level, but the women's personalities all changed very sharply in the beta route. Emma started becoming a bitch to MC (she no longer even seems to like him at all). And on the other side Sunny seems to LOATHE MC and takes every opportunity to belittle and humiliate him she can get (she is an awful, terrible bitch). Tracey hasn't been quite as bad, but yeah. I liked the NTR voyeurism aspect of that route between Emma and Marcus earlier on, but it worked because Emma was nice to MC and they started dating (sort of), but now it seemed to switch into this hardcore cuck route where you're meant to enjoy being treated like absolute shit. Not only is that not everyone's cup of tea but it's a rapid perversion of the existing characterizations.
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sorry. English is not my native language. when translated, these phrases seem quite normal.
why don't you offer your services to the developer?
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Like I said, post any of these three lines - and there are dozens and dozens more, almost all of the dialogue has minor errors here and there - straight into any kind of spell checker or Gramma checker program and it would find all of these problems. So to me this isn't just a problem of not speaking English as a first language, it is either laziness or you just don't recognize what is wrong with the writing (which based on what you said, does seem to be the case). It reads like something someone wrote on the fly and never checked. Considering the updates on this game seem to come out at a glacial pace and the writing seems to get done long before anything else, it would really behoove you/the Dev's in general to double check the writing in some basic ways, because it has noticeably declined over time to a level that is frankly kind of disgusting at times. And one way or another writing is what is fundamentally kind of the more important element to a game like this.
And yeah, I know that it's super easy to criticize rather than do something yourself. But there are a ton of free, braindead tools you could use to improve this with relatively minimal effort. Hell, you can even post all of the dialogue into ChatGPT and tell it to rewrite them with proper English (edit: I did it for you in attached; you can do dozens of lines this way at a time, it takes seconds. These still aren't perfect because they lack surrounding context, but if you did a whole script in sequence it would be even better, and as is it's already a big improvement.)
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The problem is that there are clearly two writers. You get some sentences with great structure, grammar and where the only real blights are the occasional spelling error. Then all of a sudden you get a sentence written by some dude where English clearly isn't his first language.
i did not notice spelling errors or grammer issues because i was immersed in renders and control skip
if renders are good no need for dialog u can understand what is going on
this is a minor issue, real problem is wide update frequency and out of character responses
(hey this is a porn game, if it were realistic, most we were to see would be a kiss, and mc being kicked out for being a pervert and Marcus thrown in jail for being a date raper then he would realisticly live his bbc fantasies)
wait a minute Marcus's dad is rich so no jail time for rich people so nothing would change my mistake
Marcus would be just he is but alpha path MC would not exist in reality
if renders are good no need for dialog u can understand what is going on
this is a minor issue, real problem is wide update frequency and out of character responses
(hey this is a porn game, if it were realistic, most we were to see would be a kiss, and mc being kicked out for being a pervert and Marcus thrown in jail for being a date raper then he would realisticly live his bbc fantasies)
wait a minute Marcus's dad is rich so no jail time for rich people so nothing would change my mistake
Marcus would be just he is but alpha path MC would not exist in reality
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Need help. Downloaded apk android but can't find options for save skip etc .
Also, to get ntr shall I choose less confidence?
Also, to get ntr shall I choose less confidence?
no idea about android but for NTR get confidence to below zero and sluttiness of the girls to max for best scenes
on 30+ days dev gives u a choice like NTR or Dislike NTR route save before to see both scenes thats it
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I am almost finished with Like ntr day34. with 10% day35 completed as well. The 3d guys is creating good animation, I am having no problem...
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August 26
I am almost finished with Like ntr day34. with 10% day35 completed as well. The 3d guys is creating good animation, I am having no problem...
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Nahhh, He's done this before. I'm also going to become king of the pirates. Just because I keep saying it, doesn't make it true. I think the best update expectations is sadly no expectations. Then you cannot get disappointed....again. Also his status updates being patreon exclusive posts is a kick in the face to people who have supported him before but lost faith. That's called carrot on a stick. Not all horses follow, but you can lead the ones that do anywhere.
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