xykzz

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Anyone else have issues with Chapter 4? The game bugs out to main menu when you press Skip or accidentally hit continue after a conversation has ended.
 

mihosh

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I don't get all the Chloe dissing. Chloe is smarter and is into BDSM. And this game is focused on BDSM, so players are expected to be interested into it too, right? And buttseks is icky.
 

juanel0

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Now i know, if someone is a Patreon that can pass this message i'd be really thanfull.

The moment the game went of track was Episode 4 but it wasn't because you get of the Yatch, it's because in final part of Episode 3 and in Episode 4 you are no longer a figure of autority. The whole punishment thing gets forgoten

In episode 1 and 2 the MC earn an identity, the Episode 2 it's callet "The diciplinarian" for a reason. Episode 1 it's getting into this "game" of punishment and dicipline, episode 2 is getting up in ranks in this game, and episode 3 at least the first part is enjoy of this high rank, But it gets forgoten in episode 4. That's when it's went of track.

It's so simple, you wanted to be a figure of autority, no just spank them, that's why Rachel in episode 3 is soo important, because she is the only submisive one that actually respect your autority.


I don't know if someone came to the same conclusion but i really want to make a point, that knowing THIS, may help TheGary write the next game.

It doesn't have to be dicipline, but you can't get rid of an primary aspect of the game just like that. ALSO, i would really like another version of the visit to the Yatch in episode 5 in which Rachel calls you Master and you "continue" the relationship where it ends in Episode 3 insted of just act like the second island trip never happend.
 

Blades1138

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Now i know, if someone is a Patreon that can pass this message i'd be really thanfull.

The moment the game went of track was Episode 4 but it wasn't because you get of the Yatch, it's because in final part of Episode 3 and in Episode 4 you are no longer a figure of autority. The whole punishment thing gets forgoten

In episode 1 and 2 the MC earn an identity, the Episode 2 it's callet "The diciplinarian" for a reason. Episode 1 it's getting into this "game" of punishment and dicipline, episode 2 is getting up in ranks in this game, and episode 3 at least the first part is enjoy of this high rank, But it gets forgoten in episode 4. That's when it's went of track.

It's so simple, you wanted to be a figure of autority, no just spank them, that's why Rachel in episode 3 is soo important, because she is the only submisive one that actually respect your autority.


I don't know if someone came to the same conclusion but i really want to make a point, that knowing THIS, may help TheGary write the next game.

It doesn't have to be dicipline, but you can't get rid of an primary aspect of the game just like that. ALSO, i would really like another version of the visit to the Yatch in episode 5 in which Rachel calls you Master and you "continue" the relationship where it ends in Episode 3 insted of just act like the second island trip never happend.
The 'discipline angle' is the weakest point of the game, not only because it's been done over and over by other games, but it's laughably unrealistic. Most of the plot points in the first episodes are directly lifted from games like 'Big Brother' and the like, which are grind fests with an extremely linear story. MC's relationships would have unfolded in almost the same manner if there were no public punishments at all. Private BDSM content is fine for the characters that are into it.
 
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juanel0

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The 'discipline angle' is the weakest point of the game, not only because it's been done over and over by other games, but it's laughably unrealistic. Most of the plot points in the first episodes are directly lifted from games like 'Big Brother' and the like, which are grind fests with an extremely linear story. MC's relationships would have unfolded in almost the same manner if there were no public punishments at all. Private BDSM content is fine for the characters that are into it.
Yes, episode 1 has a lot from big brother. 1 milf, one older sister who likes anal, one little sister who likes pain, and the whole dicsipline thing in chapter one it's not really the best point, it's just "something" that is there.

In episode 2, that change, and it wasn't about the discipline part, it was the "Autority" part. Like i say, that path was Rachel's path and it got discarded in episode 4, along with Rachel.

But it was an important part, even if it wasn't really the best, and when it got discarded the roles were lost.
 

Moffy

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I finished the game but i feel it will always be an unfinished game for me because there was no Rachel ending.
Don't get me wrong it was a really good game and congratulations to TheGary for making such a good game but this game could have been the best.
I would have waited another month or two if he wanted to make a Rachel ending.(I don't know it for a fact but based on comments here Rachel is the character that everyone loves the most,so they all would have waited too)
I know it's a wishful thinking but i hope TheGary makes a Rachel ending at some point and truly end this game with what everyone wants.It's just such a good game that it would be a shame if it didn't have all the right endings(Emily,Chloe and rachel).It would be the best if he could make just one more update with the rachel ending in it.

P.S.-I still can't understand that Amy got an ending but Rachel didn't,I mean REEAALLY!!!
 
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DrunkLuka

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My only complaint about the game is that chapter four have us just started with the BDSM stuff (especially when Amy started punishing them) then it just comes to a sudden stop. I get this game's been going for a while and essentially can be treated as multiple games with a continuation of the story, but it would've been even better if TheGary just gets like four or five more updates focusing on the more BDSM stuff, instead of adding more side characters that ultimately has nothing to do with the story.

Also, I'm ok with not having a Rachel ending, but would've been nice to have a what-if scenario. Also thematically I think Emily makes the most sense as the canon, and I hope these characters can be explored more in his next project.
 
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splamo

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Don't want to be a pest but there were a lot of grammar errors in this one, and in the Amy ending, in one of the sex scenes the roles of Charlotte and Amy are switched in the dialogue. That aside, this was excellent! It was a fun ride
 

splamo

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It's relevant 'cause some have the two whole brain cells required to deduce cucking is cucking, no matter if it's Tyrone or his sister.

Also, the orgy was MC thinking he was in heaven 'cause i-can't-remember-who blew on his dick while she was getting gangbanged.

But hey, if you enjoy it... i don't really give a shit, so there (y)
Sounds like you actually do give a shit my guy
 
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The ArcKnight

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Well fuck me, its been so long since I actually played this (just after the Island) that I'm probably going to have to do a fresh start.... that's ALOT of events to get through again. x.X

Can you finally fuck the younger sister?
 

juanel0

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Imagine this: 2 updates ago, instead of this weird "marry someone, we are having the ending RIGH NOW", Rachel came to the apartmen after a few long conversations with your uncle, and started to catch you "explorin" with Emily and Chloe and started to get Jealous, then the operation of your uncle is a succes but Rachel instead of going to him, stays with you, by your uncles's orders and you all go back to the Yatch, where Linda and Susan are back too, where the paths are ahead of you, The "pure" BDSM one with Chloe, the Dom/Sub with Rachel and the "pure" Romance with Emily. All of them have some bdsm(for the spanking al least) and some romance, but the focus of each path are obvious.

And we continue the diferents path that were ahead of us instead of just cut them and ending the game out of nowhere. And at the end of those paths there is an ending...

That would have been nice...

Yeah, i'm going to be here for a while in a post-game depresion for a game that could have been great, but for unknown (to me at least) reason ended.
 

splamo

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Imagine this: 2 updates ago, instead of this weird "marry someone, we are having the ending RIGH NOW", Rachel came to the apartmen after a few long conversations with your uncle, and started to catch you "explorin" with Emily and Chloe and started to get Jealous, then the operation of your uncle is a succes but Rachel instead of going to him, stays with you, by your uncles's orders and you all go back to the Yatch, where Linda and Susan are back too, where the paths are ahead of you, The "pure" BDSM one with Chloe, the Dom/Sub with Rachel and the "pure" Romance with Emily. All of them have some bdsm(for the spanking al least) and some romance, but the focus of each path are obvious.

And we continue the diferents path that were ahead of us instead of just cut them and ending the game out of nowhere. And at the end of those paths there is an ending...

That would have been nice...

Yeah, i'm going to be here for a while in a post-game depresion for a game that could have been great, but for unknown (to me at least) reason ended.
I agree there was a lot that could have been (ahem, HAREM ending) but overall I enjoyed the journey. I liked a couple of the endings, but I still see your point.
 

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Imagine this: 2 updates ago, instead of this weird "marry someone, we are having the ending RIGH NOW", Rachel came to the apartmen after a few long conversations with your uncle, and started to catch you "explorin" with Emily and Chloe and started to get Jealous, then the operation of your uncle is a succes but Rachel instead of going to him, stays with you, by your uncles's orders and you all go back to the Yatch, where Linda and Susan are back too, where the paths are ahead of you, The "pure" BDSM one with Chloe, the Dom/Sub with Rachel and the "pure" Romance with Emily. All of them have some bdsm(for the spanking al least) and some romance, but the focus of each path are obvious.

And we continue the diferents path that were ahead of us instead of just cut them and ending the game out of nowhere. And at the end of those paths there is an ending...

That would have been nice...

Yeah, i'm going to be here for a while in a post-game depresion for a game that could have been great, but for unknown (to me at least) reason ended.
I really don't know why some developers pull that shit!!They know exactly what players want but for some reason they just ignore it and won't do it.It's so frustrating to play a game for almost two years and not getting the ending that you want.
 
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