Just finished Ep 5 end of content, reaching the "To Be Continued" screen...
Overall, I enjoyed the game thus far.
It doesn't waste a lot of time progressing the story, building and paying off a few elements...
The sound design is solid, keep it coming.... and cumming...
The animations are smooth and very welcome, especially the still environmental scenes with wind blowing through trees, grass, etc.
Constructive advice:
What's missing?
-- Finishing sex shots. MC has sex with some women. In many instances, "finish" simply cuts from the sex animation / blackscreen to him and the woman sitting or laying side by side. What's missing is showing MC finishing, whether inside or outside. I think there's only 1 shot of him with sperm on his tip, but no shots of him cumming in or on the woman.
Please consider adding this. If you really want to go wild, showing the urethra vein of the penis throbbing beneath during creampies would be very satisfying for some players who prefer internal ejaculations.
-- Inconsistent sex scene controls. The intro to the mechanic of gaining foreplay points and orgasm points is 1 of 3 sex events that have this mechanic enabled. There are 2 other sex events where it's auto-played without any player interaction at all.
-- I counted around 50 typos. Did not log them, but some are very simple fixes, others are plural words thats should be singular.
-- Calling the rescued purple hair woman "petite" or "small" in Chapter 4/5 is confusing. She is neither of those. She is as tall as or taller than the MC. And she has an ass Sir Mix-a-Lot would drool over. Perhaps consider changing that dialogue?
-- The blurred out windows in almost all the internal environments could benefit from an actual view of the outdoors. Not critical, but when characters talk about seeing out those stained glass 60% opaque openings, it's not quite realistic.
In general, I look forward to the conclusion/continuation of this story. Especially if the "harem" possibilities ever become a... possibility. And definitely if the creampie options results in MC becoming a father to more than the already growing fetus in his girlfriend's belly...
Overall, I enjoyed the game thus far.
It doesn't waste a lot of time progressing the story, building and paying off a few elements...
The sound design is solid, keep it coming.... and cumming...
The animations are smooth and very welcome, especially the still environmental scenes with wind blowing through trees, grass, etc.
Constructive advice:
What's missing?
-- Finishing sex shots. MC has sex with some women. In many instances, "finish" simply cuts from the sex animation / blackscreen to him and the woman sitting or laying side by side. What's missing is showing MC finishing, whether inside or outside. I think there's only 1 shot of him with sperm on his tip, but no shots of him cumming in or on the woman.
Please consider adding this. If you really want to go wild, showing the urethra vein of the penis throbbing beneath during creampies would be very satisfying for some players who prefer internal ejaculations.
-- Inconsistent sex scene controls. The intro to the mechanic of gaining foreplay points and orgasm points is 1 of 3 sex events that have this mechanic enabled. There are 2 other sex events where it's auto-played without any player interaction at all.
-- I counted around 50 typos. Did not log them, but some are very simple fixes, others are plural words thats should be singular.
-- Calling the rescued purple hair woman "petite" or "small" in Chapter 4/5 is confusing. She is neither of those. She is as tall as or taller than the MC. And she has an ass Sir Mix-a-Lot would drool over. Perhaps consider changing that dialogue?
-- The blurred out windows in almost all the internal environments could benefit from an actual view of the outdoors. Not critical, but when characters talk about seeing out those stained glass 60% opaque openings, it's not quite realistic.
In general, I look forward to the conclusion/continuation of this story. Especially if the "harem" possibilities ever become a... possibility. And definitely if the creampie options results in MC becoming a father to more than the already growing fetus in his girlfriend's belly...
