VN Ren'Py Curvy Town [v0.3.3] [Hvostt]

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mr-jugger

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First off, loving the story so far.
Other than some minor grammar inconsistencies, the plot seems to have a lot of potential so far. And looking forward to see how it continues.
One question id like to ask is if there will be potential romance route options. With who, that can be up to you. But was wondering if that was a thought or if its just going to be a linear plot?
 
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mr-jugger said:
First off, loving the story so far.
Other than some minor grammar inconsistencies, the plot seems to have a lot of potential so far. And looking forward to see how it continues.
One question id like to ask is if there will be potential romance route options. With who, that can be up to you. But was wondering if that was a thought or if its just going to be a linear plot?
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At this stage, the plot will be linear, but at the end of the whole game, a surprise awaits the most patient!
There will be romantic lines, but not in the way you imagine.
 
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mr-jugger

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Just played the current beta from boosty.
little short, but it sounds like its going to have a lot more content to it once the final version of v1.2 is ready.
eager to see more of what you got in store~
 
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mr-jugger said:
Just played the current beta from boosty.
little short, but it sounds like its going to have a lot more content to it once the final version of v1.2 is ready.
eager to see more of what you got in store~
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Update 0.1.2 will be released on April 10 for boosty, the update will be more than 0.1.1.
 
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Hi Hvostt ,

I tried your game v0.1.2. Thank you for making it and sharing it publicly here.

The theme is interesting, and I'm sure it will be popular for fans of Breast Expansion and Bimboification.

AI CG is still a new art form, and I think you have done a good job with the current tools available.

However, as negative feedback: I felt a little exhausted reading the dialogue. It is my advice to reduce many of the small conversational sentences which do not add any useful information. For example: not every character needs to react or comment to every statement. "Uh-huh", "Thankyou", "Bye" etc etc. It feels like the dialogue is trying too hard to imitate real back and forth conversation, when this is unnecssary.

Good luck with your game!
 
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osanaiko said:
Hi Hvostt ,

I tried your game v0.1.2. Thank you for making it and sharing it publicly here.

The theme is interesting, and I'm sure it will be popular for fans of Breast Expansion and Bimboification.

AI CG is still a new art form, and I think you have done a good job with the current tools available.

However, as negative feedback: I felt a little exhausted reading the dialogue. It is my advice to reduce many of the small conversational sentences which do not add any useful information. For example: not every character needs to react or comment to every statement. "Uh-huh", "Thankyou", "Bye" etc etc. It feels like the dialogue is trying too hard to imitate real back and forth conversation, when this is unnecssary.

Good luck with your game!
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Thank you so much for the words of encouragement and your review!
About the dialogues, I will try to make it all more relaxed, but you get my point, because many lines of dialogue act as an enlivening of the characters and add to their character. I tried to give these very characters lively dialogue (I understand that it stretches the text a bit) I will try to find a balance so that everyone would be more comfortable following the story.
 
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