Take your time, and when that time hits again, take a deep breath, you got this.It's not really about needing the girl to already be in love with the MC, or even in lust. Apathy or annoyance with explanation doesn't even bother me. Just the "This girl always seems to dislike me and I've never understood why/don't know what I did/she won't tell me what's wrong" trope, especially when we the reader/player/watcher aren't given any clues as to why. It's my least-favorite type of character in any medium, and sometimes it's when I lose interest completely.
Then, that's the character I have to win over by trying to guess music I never even heard of? (I didn't try all categories, but ...)
Anyway, We'll see, but not tonight.
And again, whenever you want that answer from me about why Meredith is the way she is (that is not in Chapter 3 or 4 yet - this is more of a long-game), I am down for that too. Answer might be a bit surprising - but if you want first-hand experience without any spoiler, I’m cool with that too. Thanks again for at least giving Cyberheart a try, and I look forward to seeing what you think after a few more chapters!
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