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HunkyDunx

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IDK if the dev is on here or will see this but I wanted to report some typos to him. I think you should make hu into huh. when I talk to cary june and select the apologize button for the flirting? she gives me two weird scens of dialogue, both saying don't bother. Idk if the dialogue of the other choice got copied into the choice or not but its sounds weird when she talks again after telling you to not bother and move along not wanting to take more of your time. When you sit down to talk to the boss trish suddenly comes up saying she needs to know what they are talking about, it should be "It may be shameful but I need to know what is going on in the company". The lines from trish sounds awkward, maybe you could reword that line better? Bonk in the scene when trish trips sounds weird maybe it should be thud?. Jup.It's Trish should be yup, bonked should probabbly be bumped. Maybe the names of the character should be question marks until they introduce themselves to you, specifically cary-june since even the mc in the game world hasn't met her yet. When you accompany cary-june and got to the car her name turned into catherine oddly enough. When you go to the pillar in the parking lot it should be "And what do you want to do with it now". when you meet zandra, cary-june says buffed, I think its buff. In her dialogue when cary-june talks about throwing her broken heels "This ones? No way" I think it should be these? nah. When talking to artemis the car it should be Artemis: Start the engine and open the doors on both sides. Thats all I got up to. Typos aside, Promising game so far, keep it up!
Not being funny here mate BUT, you're picking on the dev's English and your message to him is riddled with grammatical errors! You have spelling mistakes, starting sentences with lower case, not capitalising characters names and not punctuating correctly. What makes it even more shameful is the system has a spell checker and half the errors are underlined in red. Need to sort your side out first buddy!
 

Ragnar

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The story is interesting and the models are really good minus PewDiPie. The sex scenes come out of nowhere but that's not a bad thing, the tone of the game is like a James Bond movie so fuck em' all.
Kelly best girl.
 
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monksims

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It's a promising start to a story. But, as some have commented already, a proofreader would be a very good idea.
Is Cary-June really Cary-June or Catherine who had some balance issues with her cheap shoes? Nice renders with faces that look unique.
 

Baka_Energy_studios

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Hey hey folks, how´s life?
I haven´t received the game dev tag as of yet but i assure you that i´m the humble dev of "Softlinxxx".



Let's hope it's a story driven game instead of "I'll fuck every woman because it's a game". It could be a very interesting one, if well developed, so good luck, I'm going to try the game out then wait for a couple of updates.
Why not both?


When I see the MC all I can see is Homelander. Gonna give it a whirl, because of the ladies. :love:
Reminds me that i still have the 2nd season to watch.

I'm impressed, not a bad game... Look forward to seeing what happens next.
Thanks. I´m excited too.

Interesting premise with good CG using some assets and backgrounds I had not seen a thousand times before, so kudos to the dev.
I also like the fact that each character model has been tweaked enough to appear rather unique.
For a first release there is a good amount of content.
Two (minor) cons: the white text on bright backgrounds can be difficult to read sometimes, and the devs need an english proofreader to get rid of the spelling and grammar mistakes.

All in all a very promising VN.
Thanks dude. I tried to make them look different, except for Cary-June. Her Lillith 7 model is only tweaked in regards to her boobs and legs.
No let's hope we can fuck as many dames as possible because that's what you do in porn games lol.
My kind of dude.

Can’t wait to fuck the robot Ava
You and me both.

It's a promising start to a story. But, as some have commented already, a proofreader would be a very good idea.
Is Cary-June really Cary-June or Catherine who had some balance issues with her cheap shoes? Nice renders with faces that look unique.
Since some pointed that "Catherine" mistake out, i adjusted the script for the next release accordingly. And the font has now a thicker contour around the dialogue so it should be easier to read.
Thanks for all the positivity guys. Version 0.5 is on its way.
 

Pogo123

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renders seem to look ok. girls are all really nice shaped and curvy. but male protagonist AND playing a young AND also smooth guy is a big nono for me. either i can play hot females, fugly guys or old men. but for all others have fun with this ordinary harem game.
 

Mario4don

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Dev Update
Hey hey folks, how´s life?
I hope you´re doing well.
Progress for next version is going well too. If you want a percentage, let´s say its about 50-60% done. Changed the workflow from doing big chunks of rendering weeks long and then switching to writing and coding to finish scenes in one go: rendering the scene, then writing and coding, then off to the next batch of images and so on.
This way, it´s easier to keep everything tightly together and the workload is a bit more varied.

What´s up for the next release?
The main character finds a clue about where the drone that attacked came from and is now meeting someone he hasn´t seen for some while. Only to discover that he gets into some deep trouble. But you do, what a man´s gotta do, right?
See ya around at the beginning of next month.
Stay charged!
 

Mario4don

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Dev Update

Hey hey folks, how´s life?
I hope all are well and charged.
Next Release is just a few days away. The city scenes took a while to render and to compose but i think they turned out pretty good(not boasting). But some assets ... just look good on the outside or the promo images. You´ll notice that when you reach the floor scene banger in v0.5. From afar the walls look good and the graffiti is nice but then, up close, they get pixelated and i don´t have any idea on how to fix that for now although i´m still looking on YT for tutorials on 3D artworking and such.
Next thing is the monthly wallpaper which will be released shortly after the version Update.
Keep your head up folks and stay charged!
 

Mario4don

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Softlinxxx v0.5 Update

Hey hey folks, anyone up for a trip to the city? Just in time before the weekend. I´m proud of myself, gonna enjoy some nice stuff for reaching my goal this month. Wallpaper for November will be up on sunday.

Story progression: Our MC is following a breadcrumb, leading him into Arriaka the city nearby. Filled with augmented people of all kinds, wavelenghts of every color and opportunities to win and lose. Download the latest version if you want to know more.

Changelog:
v0.5
- added patron credits
- 113 new images, 672 in total
- made the contour around the dialogue thicker. Text should be more easy on the eyes now.
- some grammar correction and such
- one new character
- some side characters
- new sound effects
- tried to adjust the music volume to one level

Downloads:




Have fun and stay charged!
 

Look-see

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Aug 19, 2018
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not bad so far and i rarely like sci-fi. kinda dissapointed we couldn't choose if we wanted Keeley to engage in lesbian scene or not. kinda bugged me. in regards to hooking up with all the girls? well as long as we can decide which girls we hook up with i got no problems. all in all pretty good.
 
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