Not being funny here mate BUT, you're picking on the dev's English and your message to him is riddled with grammatical errors! You have spelling mistakes, starting sentences with lower case, not capitalising characters names and not punctuating correctly. What makes it even more shameful is the system has a spell checker and half the errors are underlined in red. Need to sort your side out first buddy!IDK if the dev is on here or will see this but I wanted to report some typos to him. I think you should make hu into huh. when I talk to cary june and select the apologize button for the flirting? she gives me two weird scens of dialogue, both saying don't bother. Idk if the dialogue of the other choice got copied into the choice or not but its sounds weird when she talks again after telling you to not bother and move along not wanting to take more of your time. When you sit down to talk to the boss trish suddenly comes up saying she needs to know what they are talking about, it should be "It may be shameful but I need to know what is going on in the company". The lines from trish sounds awkward, maybe you could reword that line better? Bonk in the scene when trish trips sounds weird maybe it should be thud?. Jup.It's Trish should be yup, bonked should probabbly be bumped. Maybe the names of the character should be question marks until they introduce themselves to you, specifically cary-june since even the mc in the game world hasn't met her yet. When you accompany cary-june and got to the car her name turned into catherine oddly enough. When you go to the pillar in the parking lot it should be "And what do you want to do with it now". when you meet zandra, cary-june says buffed, I think its buff. In her dialogue when cary-june talks about throwing her broken heels "This ones? No way" I think it should be these? nah. When talking to artemis the car it should be Artemis: Start the engine and open the doors on both sides. Thats all I got up to. Typos aside, Promising game so far, keep it up!