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You're welcome. Respect and appreciation where it's due.Thank you so much for your words
Anyway, since I always try to listen to the feedback, I'm rewriting the introduction of Chapter I, there will be just one month and not three for the time jump between the events of the Arrival in the Barrows and the beginning of the private investigation; I'm also rewriting the scene to give less the impression that the MC was never involved in the repairing process of the clinic.
1 month or 2 or even half a year....pff, to quote Jesus from The Big Lebowsk: "It don't matter to Jesus!"
She's a woman, they got a way to get men doing all the heavy lifitng. And she is paying, so...no issues here.
Besides the MC can all Izy her pet so it's even fitting if he himself does everything for her
or her letting him do all the work.