VN Ren'Py Abandoned Cyberspace [v0.15] [Cyberreality Games]

[Look-see]

wasnt fond of seeing some random dude getting a BJ. aside from that some sex scenes are forced in that you cant decide to avoid it. in general though not bad, definitely alot happening.

i was just never a big fan of not having choices on who to interact with. never been attracted to the virtual reality concept too much either, but i dont hate it.

also having a maledom option without the sharing would've been nice but eh, what can you do

all in all i like it just fine so far.

Good luck dev

 

[EthanHunt95]

Promising story
Looking forward future updates....
This one 1st&top10 lists of my 2022...
Good starting this year to me
Good luck Dev..
Keep it up

 

[Big Black Banana]

Looks and sounds good. Can't wait to try later tonight...

 

[Claire R.E.]

Very tasty game! Can't wait to continue! Top ten games beginning 2022

 

[IdanSama]

Great game with a great idea!
There seemed to be a choice, before the 'friends mom' cyberspace scene, to go for a bdsm/domination route. seemed like the choice is for the entire game.. I really hope that comes into play later, especially with the mom..

 

[TheDick69+]

I liked the start and will continue to follow this one. Keep up the good work, Dev!

 

[Mr.Hunter69]

it seem cool i like test it GG

 

[tombombadinho]

Nice start man. Looking foward to this

 

[ShiroObake]

a good and refreshing idea! good start. cant wait for more. GJ DEV!

 

[brittC25]

Very promising game.
Added to watch list.

 

[broho1234]

Played version 0.1 till the end on the "romance" path (not "dominance").
Very promising game:
-interesting story
-beautiful girls/women
-the mom is a central character/love interest and is very beautiful
-it has sex scenes from the beginning, although not with the main love interests
The story involves 5 very powerful families and the MC seems to belong to one of them.
In this respect, it is similar to "The DeLuca Family" but this one has sex scenes from the beginning. Also it has a better balance between seduction/sex and action while the "The DeLuca Family" has very little seduction/sex and a lot of mafia stories.
Overall it starts as a 5 stars game, in my opinion.
Hopefully it will only improve from here while the story develops.

 

[Dojinji]

Thank you for all the kind replies. Telling an interesting and emotional story was the main motivation for me to create the game so I'm glad people are liking it so far.

As for the further development. Next update will be a non-content one. I plan to move the personality points away from the optional scenarios as them being tied to these defeats one of the purposes of these scenarios (people being able to avoid certain fetishes).
Furthermore I want to add a scene gallery and fix typing/grammar mistakes.
As English isn't my first language fixing grammar mistakes isn't that easy for me so if someone wants to help me with that just pm me.
I may also include an option at the start of the game so people can choose to net get shown renders which display sexual acts between other male characters and women (like the envoy blowjob)
I personally didn't think it is a big deal as these characters are just briefly shown and will probably never appear again but implementing a way to not see it would be easy so let me know it there is any interest in it.

0.2 will be a story update and from then I plan to alternate between updates focused on the main story (0.2, 0.4 etc) and ones that focus on side stories (0.3,05 etc). It won't be a strict distinction so there might be main story elements during the side story updates but it won't be the focus. I especially plan to use these side stories for more world and character building.

Till then, enjoy my game

 

[desmosome]

It wasn't bad. The overview seemed quite good, so I had higher expectations in the writing. Looking back at it now, I can see that it does have some grammatical issues and maybe some hints that the dev is not a native speaker.

Overall, I found the world and setting quite interesting. The dialogues and prose definitely need some work. It comes off as rather unnatural and far from the way real people talk or interact with each other. The user dictated relationships do not help in this respect. "Thank you, sister, we should talk to mother about the problems I, your brother, may be facing." I made that up, but that is how it reads to me. It's unnatural.

I can definitely see some thought went into the story telling. Holding back on revealing the story and the circumstances surrounding the MC is an effective way to get people engaged. That said, it can be a double edged sword when abused and repeated without justification. All I'm saying is that the sister and mom better have a damn good reason for not telling the MC shit lol. It makes sense from a narrative perspective, but it might be problematic from a characterization point of view.

Visuals are average for the average new dev. Good models, decent posing, decent render quality.

Sex scenes were pretty decent for a new dev. Still on the underwhelming side, but this is certainly not a straightforward thing anyone can do well. It should improve with experience and as the plot advances.

The music... that one synthwave track is quite fitting for the title screen or certain "ramp up to action" sequences, but playing it so much as the "default" track became pretty grating. It often didn't fit the tone of the scene.

Overall, I think it was a solid B. The story is interesting. Perhaps the porn side of it will pay off as well, seeing as I am definitely into the concept of dominating the mom and everyone else.

 

[sincinbearcity]

Saved on the watchlist! Great start to the story, hot characters, two paths catering to multiple different fetishes. Looking forward to more!

 

[Rectory]

Thank you for all the kind replies. Telling an interesting and emotional story was the main motivation for me to create the game so I'm glad people are liking it so far.

As for the further development. Next update will be a non-content one. I plan to move the personality points away from the optional scenarios as them being tied to these defeats one of the purposes of these scenarios (people being able to avoid certain fetishes).
Furthermore I want to add a scene gallery and fix typing/grammar mistakes.
As English isn't my first language fixing grammar mistakes isn't that easy for me so if someone wants to help me with that just pm me.
I may also include an option at the start of the game so people can choose to net get shown renders which display sexual acts between other male characters and women (like the envoy blowjob)
I personally didn't think it is a big deal as these characters are just briefly shown and will probably never appear again but implementing a way to not see it would be easy so let me know it there is any interest in it.

0.2 will be a story update and from then I plan to alternate between updates focused on the main story (0.2, 0.4 etc) and ones that focus on side stories (0.3,05 etc). It won't be a strict distinction so there might be main story elements during the side story updates but it won't be the focus. I especially plan to use these side stories for more world and character building.

Till then, enjoy my game

But if side story updates getting as much as focus same as main path as you are calling it alternate updates, then people may wont like it after some updates.

So, atleast at later stage, after you show sufficient world and character building which needs for the story, please change ur focus to main story in every updates while also giving some 5-10 % content for side stories too in every update.

 

[The ArcKnight]

Thank you for all the kind replies. Telling an interesting and emotional story was the main motivation for me to create the game so I'm glad people are liking it so far.

As for the further development. Next update will be a non-content one. I plan to move the personality points away from the optional scenarios as them being tied to these defeats one of the purposes of these scenarios (people being able to avoid certain fetishes).
Furthermore I want to add a scene gallery and fix typing/grammar mistakes.
As English isn't my first language fixing grammar mistakes isn't that easy for me so if someone wants to help me with that just pm me.
I may also include an option at the start of the game so people can choose to net get shown renders which display sexual acts between other male characters and women (like the envoy blowjob)
I personally didn't think it is a big deal as these characters are just briefly shown and will probably never appear again but implementing a way to not see it would be easy so let me know it there is any interest in it.

0.2 will be a story update and from then I plan to alternate between updates focused on the main story (0.2, 0.4 etc) and ones that focus on side stories (0.3,05 etc). It won't be a strict distinction so there might be main story elements during the side story updates but it won't be the focus. I especially plan to use these side stories for more world and character building.

Till then, enjoy my game

As someone who dislikes voyeurism, I wholeheartedly endorse this change. Thank you.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

Thank you for all the kind replies. Telling an interesting and emotional story was the main motivation for me to create the game so I'm glad people are liking it so far.

As for the further development. Next update will be a non-content one. I plan to move the personality points away from the optional scenarios as them being tied to these defeats one of the purposes of these scenarios (people being able to avoid certain fetishes).
Furthermore I want to add a scene gallery and fix typing/grammar mistakes.
As English isn't my first language fixing grammar mistakes isn't that easy for me so if someone wants to help me with that just pm me.
I may also include an option at the start of the game so people can choose to net get shown renders which display sexual acts between other male characters and women (like the envoy blowjob)
I personally didn't think it is a big deal as these characters are just briefly shown and will probably never appear again but implementing a way to not see it would be easy so let me know it there is any interest in it.

0.2 will be a story update and from then I plan to alternate between updates focused on the main story (0.2, 0.4 etc) and ones that focus on side stories (0.3,05 etc). It won't be a strict distinction so there might be main story elements during the side story updates but it won't be the focus. I especially plan to use these side stories for more world and character building.

Till then, enjoy my game

This is ambitious as fuck for a first time vn. I truly enjoyed it. Loved that others in the cyberspace are having sex (voyeurism actually used correctly). Also loved sharing is optional and not with the main lis. I played both cyber options and both were solid scenes.

Becareful not to lose your vision from some demanding pirates. Make your story or at least get paid to change any part of it.

This vn has a lot of promise, it maybe too emotional for me (I'm not a drama romance fan) but you truly got something unique here. I will follow it and look forward to playing more. Stick to your vision and the very best of luck

 

[Dojinji]

Hello everyone!
Just released the first update.. The patch notes are listed below.

0.15
- added a scene gallery
- removed the personality points from the optional scenarios. From now on they will be earned during the main story. Starting a new game is recommended. Shouldn’t be necessary in the future anymore.
- because of that I added a few new renders for a love/dominance choice and removed some text explaining the optional scenarios
- fixed a lot of spelling- and grammar mistakes
- changed some font styles

v 0.2 will be the next content update with 250+ new renders and the continuation of the main story. Right now the patreon release is planned for the end of February. The public release will be 2-3 weeks later.
Oh and here are two preview images

 

[Boldano]

Wow this is awesome so far, big fan of the "landlady" model. The scene with the young girl and the soldier was great, I wasn't expecting to get that emotional going into this game lol.

 

[Hysni]

Nice looking game good luck with updates ....#PregTag needed