VN Ren'Py Abandoned Dark Breed [v0.1] [Adults city]

[Deleted member 219172]

Looks good to me, some other kind of fetishes

 

[Asia Argento]

Incomplete (only a prologue) and has some really bad grammar errors. Decent ideas but could use a proofreaders help so far... Also, maybe some choices so I am not just hitting enter to continue...

 

[IncestMommy]

Incomplete (only a prologue) and has some really bad grammar errors. Decent ideas but could use a proofreaders help so far... Also, maybe some choices so I am not just hitting enter to continue...

Im a writer of rhat game. I had no response from developer for 3 months so i guess project is dead until i find someone new and proofreaders. English is not my native.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Im a writer of rhat game. I had no response from developer for 3 months so i guess project is dead until i find someone new and proofreaders. English is not my native.

I think you meant to say....
I am the writer of that game.

 

[IncestMommy]

I think you meant to say....
I am the writer of that game.

Well yeah. Texting from mobile is pain in the ass.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Well yeah. Texting from mobile is pain in the ass.

Consider me as one of the proofreader generals.

 

[IncestMommy]

Consider me as one of the proofreader generals.

Jesus i just realise that i was talking woth ypu months ago.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Jesus i just realise that i was talking woth ypu months ago.

Yeah and the game was abandoned or something.
Never heard from that game again.

 

[Asia Argento]

Yeah and the game was abandoned or something.
Never heard from that game again.

it figures. Looks like another solid idea ruined by a dev being a turd.