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rciik

Member
Jun 5, 2017
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Best update as of yet and seemed to be longer as well. Very nice!

I noticed some weird lines. I called Jennifer, but later in game there are lines mentioning Jennifer, but those lines are then also repeated and Jennifer is replaced by Georgina - so those paths seems to be missing variables.

I have 3 paths (daughter, daughter & Elena, harem) but the best path seems to be daughter & Elena.
 

EvilMonkey

Active Member
Aug 20, 2017
567
864
Did anyone else notice that the swimwear descriptions for the photoshoot didn't match up to the actual swimwear? The 'pink one-piece' was actually a blue and gold patterned suit and the 'black two-piece bikini' is actually a red textured one-piece?

I also noticed a few mentions from Elena about doing things with her and our 'relationship', even though I'm on a pure daughter route and rejected all but D.
 

petamboo

Newbie
Sep 12, 2017
49
57
maybe sissification or female protagonist should be added to the tags?
The substandard writing in this game is also present in Melody.
Like wtf? This game has a loser MC which the player has no control over. D has been blue balling the MC for like 2 years and as the MC you are forced to watch him say "Oh that's ok D, take your time. Whenever you're ready D. I love you."
THEN! when the fucken MC finally gets to penetrate the bobble head with a gigantic cock, you - the player - doesn't even get to choose if you cum inside or not. Rather, you are forced by Mr Dots to come outside like a pussy-girl-homo. Fucken bullshit.
And what's up with the size of D's head anyways? It's like the height of her head is greater than the size of her torso, it makes no sense.
 
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throd33

Newbie
May 15, 2018
39
25
Not familiar with the service, does the humble bundle expire in time? or it's an online store like steam etc...
 

Chatterbox

Active Member
Game Developer
May 28, 2018
560
3,544
MrDots (I know he doesn't follow this forum), fuck you and the horse you rode in on. (Just kidding. I love your work!) I'm at work now, after 3 hours of sleep, and with a sore dick. :-D

And Lyta (with just two, brief scenes) has officially taken my spot for 3rd-favorite girl, after D and Georgina. <3
Fuck yeah! Lyta needs some screen time!
 

Deleted member 95950

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Jul 3, 2017
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Just playing the train scene now, would have been comedy gold if D asking whether you find Elena attractive was immediately followed by a 'Cum' option.
 

Mt PewPew

Active Member
May 3, 2018
891
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You know, even though there's no way dad & daughter could actually get married, (being as they are, you know, dad & daughter,) they COULD just fake it. They already legally have the same surname and are planning a move to a new city: just slap on a couple rings and represent themselves to everyone in the new location as man & wife. They'd have to break with most everyone who knew they were related, (except the few who might be in on it - like Elena,) but it's a plot device that has been used before, (at least with a brother & sister pair).

R.I.P. George H. W. Bush.
Actually, they don't even need to slap on the rings, they already are wearing them. F bought them and they both have been wearing them even before D returned home. D did move it to a different finger to keep Rachel from figuring it out and taking it from her though.
 

wrx21

Active Member
Donor
Jun 15, 2017
860
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there's one thing i really didn't liked in this update and it is Georgina spying on F through webcam,she really fell in my eyes there...I read Jennifer did it even worse so i'm glad i'm not on her route
got to say i totally didn't expected to see D resolving her situation with mom,F getting to go away with D back home and D losing virginity in the same update. Game picked up a pace,i'm glad to see it but i also hope that doesn't mean that there's only few updates left until it's completion
 

Uzite Brun

Newbie
Nov 10, 2017
39
75
Great update. Can't wait to see how the different storylines develop. Looking forward to the update with a foursome with daughter, Helena and Jennifer or daughter, Helena and Georgina.
 

H.K

Newbie
Apr 10, 2018
97
28
Can someone upload the walkthrough mod for chap 2 ? Not all countries in the world support "EASY & CONVENIENT" international online payment using cards, as much as I would like to help the creators.
 

Jeff Steel

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
Jun 2, 2017
1,145
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maybe sissification or female protagonist should be added to the tags?

you - the player - doesn't even get to choose if you cum inside or not. Rather, you are forced by Mr Dots to come outside like a pussy-girl-homo. Fucken bullshit.
I presume you mean that you are upset you did not have this “game” choice and not that, in real life, you would actually consider this a valid choice in a similar type of situation. I also assume you are upset with every “game over” bad ending. Given the game’s previous game over endings, the promise to not cum inside with a cum inside choice would have been a game over. Is it that you wanted the option of going to the game over screen?

Btw, might I suggest you stop playing this VN as you don’t like the renders, you don’t like the writing, and you don’t like the choices or player choice paths. I’m not criticizing your criticisms (except the “I want the cum inside” choice), but you seem to genuinely not enjoy the experience of this VN, which leads me to question why you play it.

I checked your previous 39 posts on the other games you’ve bashed, and A great many of your complaints have to do with not being able to impregnate someone. To be sure that is a discussed option in this VN, just not today after MC promises not to. However, why would you want to make a bobble headed bad-dialogue baby anyway?
 
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