I can't believe I'm saying this for a porn game, but...
less sex!
I find myself desperately clicking through sex scenes to try to get back to the game.
Some are incredible, but there are SO GOD DAMN MANY that you just push past them unless they are new or interesting.
Also, with the dialog box?
You can write 2, even three sentences in a box.
I appreciate going to the length of writing extended back and forths to make the dialog (and thus the characters) more real, but what could be said in 10 dialog boxes is said in 50.
Even without editing out one single word of dialog, the number of boxes could be reduced by 80%.
Lastly? the choice (i think near the 75% mark of chapter 2 to
seems way too forced to me. I don't see why that choice needs to be made. If a game wants to force a "choose A or B, but not both" option, then there should be a reason why A prevents B, and vice versa.
In this case, A and B have never met. Down the line, you could make this a requirement, if you so chose to, but I don't see a good reason to go with it.
In a pure-fantasy porn game, I'm a "have my cake and eat it too" kinda guy, unless there is a good story with a compelling reason to choose one or the other.
Thanks to the walkthru mod allowing you to turn relationships on or off? I made a choice, and then turned the other back on.
In chapter 3 (why doesn't it import saves the way chapter 2 does? can't help but wonder how many flags that chapter 1 and 2 saves have and what potentially is lost by them nt transfering over), I also turned the relationship back on, and to date have had no issues.