VN Ren'Py Completed Dating My Daughter [Ch. 1-4 v1.01] [MrDots Games]

[RustyV]

D loses.
So I don' know why it matters if you have the option to have F kiss her or not.
You would think if F doesn't kiss her then they shouldn't do anything naughty and she should win.
If the goal is to have D not get the modeling contract she could opt not to sign it the outcome would be the same.
Then there is the choice made a few updates earlier about what bikini to wear. If you went with D's choice it was supposed to enable her to win the contest.

 

[IamJAG]

Just finished a first unassisted playthrough of chapter 3. Christ, what a whirlwind of a chapter it was. Genuinely didn't expect some of those revelations, and didn't expect how pissed off a single character could make me feel. Solid work!

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[wibbling]

D loses.
So I don' know why it matters if you have the option to have F kiss her or not.
You would think if F doesn't kiss her then they shouldn't do anything naughty and she should win.
If the goal is to have D not get the modeling contract she could opt not to sign it the outcome would be the same.
Then there is the choice made a few updates earlier about what bikini to wear. If you went with D's choice it was supposed to enable her to win the contest.

I only have one disappointment with the story so far and ^ this has been it. Everything was geared to D winning the contest and for it to be lost so easily, and the bikini choice to be ignored, seems badly thought out and a deliberately contrived slap in the face to our expectations. I remain hopeful that the outcome we have seen so far will just be one of a few possibles, and perhaps she can still win, e.g. maybe Tyra is exposed, and D gets to take her winning place, or the massive online support will allow her to get another modelling contract or establish her own modelling company with the help of F, Cass, and Geraldine, and maybe Ryan can return to help. Anyhoo, I wait with bated breath for the final ch3 update to see what happens.

 

[RustyV]

I was just hoping for a rewrite that could take you to the same place but let D have the option of winning.
If the idea was that D will be disillusioned with the modeling industry it could have been accomplished with her winning, getting a contract and seeing how awful it really is.
Georgina could have still been let go as her being too old (which in the modeling world she is), D and F could still have gotten a house, but maybe when D got the pregnancy scare that could have made her decide to go out on her own.
IMO D and the gang will start their own agency in Chapter 4 or get a van and drive around solving mysteries.

 

[wibbling]

 

[RustyV]

Just put your under pants on your head and say Wobble!

 

[Irgendwie Irgendwo]

That is pretty much what I expect to happen. We know that Lisa (daughter, as you know) will be a very successful model. The initial way to reach that goal was through the contest; this door has been slammed shut. On top of that she's disillusioned with the industry, so we have to bring her back in somehow.

So she definitely will have to somehow get the feedback that she generated on social media and TV. Maybe Elena and / or Jenny saw it and can relay it, with the rest of the gang maybe being sceptical at first and after doing research decide they could do something with it. They remember that creepy guy offering a contract (and we know from the dev team that he will play a role in C4) and contact him. He will be his creepy self and scare Lisa and the gang off; I don't think they will sign with him since then we're in the ballpark of getting her out of it again. My estimation will be that he is with Tyra in C4 and they will play the usual pathetic villain role. (We already had Tyra realising during the orgy that she actually lost, she just doesn't know yet how much.)

In that situation we have an aspiring model (Lisa), a veteran model and mentor (Georgina), a fired experienced agency worker hell-bent on revenge (Cassandra) and somebody who knows the business side (MC) and can take the odd photo shoot. They could also bring in the one or other model that way, or Ryan for some guest appearances.

Not saying this will be the C4 plot, but this speculation is as good as any. Btw, tzhat's also why I think that (hopefully avoidable) pregnancy is endgame, what's the point of a successful modeling career for bikinis and lingerie when you constantly have to retouch stretch marks.

 

[wibbling]

I was just hoping for a rewrite that could take you to the same place but let D have the option of winning.
If the idea was that D will be disillusioned with the modeling industry it could have been accomplished with her winning, getting a contract and seeing how awful it really is.
Georgina could have still been let go as her being too old (which in the modeling world she is), D and F could still have gotten a house, but maybe when D got the pregnancy scare that could have made her decide to go out on her own.
IMO D and the gang will start their own agency in Chapter 4 or get a van and drive around solving mysteries.

I worked as a fashion photographer for a while. It wasn't as seedy as the DMD competition made it out to be, or maybe I didn't attend the "right" events ... or maybe I am too seedy to have noticed. The main thing that turned me off, was how dumb the industry was in general. There weren't a lot of brain cells to be rubbed together, with the odd exception of course. Georgina is a little old for the mainstream market but there is still plenty of work for more mature models these days. I like the idea of the group forming their own agency though, so that F and D have more control and can include the others they know and like into the business. As for the pregnancy "scare", I thought that was probably just one possible outcome, if for example D forgets to take her pill. It WOULD be nice to have control over that outcome. It also felt very deja vu, I could hear a "Melody" playing in the background.

 

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[GrammerCop]

Irgendwie Irgendwo - It seems that this may be the most likely way forward. I am looking forward to the update next year to see what the developer has come up with.

Also, having seen the possibility of life after losing the contest, to everyone, I apologize for my earlier outbursts.

 

[crugh2112]

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You included Scrappy. That abortion killed a wonderful show. Even as a child I felt the end coming. NO, to small dogs! HA!

 

[wibbling]

You included Scrappy. That abortion killed a wonderful show. Even as a child I felt the end coming. NO, to small dogs! HA!

Yea, I hated that runt too. Big dog ✔, small dog ✘

 

[IamJAG]

That is pretty much what I expect to happen. We know that Lisa (daughter, as you know) will be a very successful model. The initial way to reach that goal was through the contest; this door has been slammed shut. On top of that she's disillusioned with the industry, so we have to bring her back in somehow.

So she definitely will have to somehow get the feedback that she generated on social media and TV. Maybe Elena and / or Jenny saw it and can relay it, with the rest of the gang maybe being sceptical at first and after doing research decide they could do something with it. They remember that creepy guy offering a contract (and we know from the dev team that he will play a role in C4) and contact him. He will be his creepy self and scare Lisa and the gang off; I don't think they will sign with him since then we're in the ballpark of getting her out of it again. My estimation will be that he is with Tyra in C4 and they will play the usual pathetic villain role. (We already had Tyra realising during the orgy that she actually lost, she just doesn't know yet how much.)

In that situation we have an aspiring model (Lisa), a veteran model and mentor (Georgina), a fired experienced agency worker hell-bent on revenge (Cassandra) and somebody who knows the business side (MC) and can take the odd photo shoot. They could also bring in the one or other model that way, or Ryan for some guest appearances.

Not saying this will be the C4 plot, but this speculation is as good as any. Btw, tzhat's also why I think that (hopefully avoidable) pregnancy is endgame, what's the point of a successful modeling career for bikinis and lingerie when you constantly have to retouch stretch marks.

Sounds reasonable. Would be better if a drop kick or two could be added in the direction of certain characters.. No names necessary.

 

[Slytherin͏]

I've two questions

1. I didn't kiss D, then why D still said Chad clicked their picture when they were kissing after the bikini round?
2. Is this game completed or still something left?

 

[Pitrik]

I've two questions

1. I didn't kiss D, then why D still said Chad clicked their picture when they were kissing after the bikini round?
2. Is this game completed or still something left?

Is a bug and already reported and will be fixed and no isn't completed because next month will be added last content of ch3.. In 2021 will start ch4 ( final chapter)

 

[YouDontKnowMeYet]

This is only chapter 3?

 

[RustyV]

According to the news broadcast on the TV during the orgy people thought D should have won.
She now has a lot of fans, so I could see her using that as a base to build from. Casandra and Georgina need work so with their experience and Graham's backing D could have her own business.
Seems there is less and less of a role for Elena and Jennifer except as sex diversions.
I'm hoping for Ruby to reappear in a D positive role.

 

[cakeny]

According to the news broadcast on the TV during the orgy people thought D should have won.
She now has a lot of fans, so I could see her using that as a base to build from. Casandra and Georgina need work so with their experience and Graham's backing D could have her own business.
Seems there is less and less of a role for Elena and Jennifer except as sex diversions.
I'm hoping for Ruby to reappear in a D positive role.

Ruby wasn't much of a friend at the end. Would say she doesn't deserve any continuation.

 

[wibbling]

I wasn't greatly fond of Ruby, she was okay. The announcer constantly making the corny "jewel" pun was annoying, but that wasn't her fault, and announcers are often annoying. Saying that, she did kind of let D down by not looking out for her. The one I took a shine to was Sasha. I liked her look and the outfits she wore. Plus she reminds me of Elena a bit. I imagine the dynamic between Elena and Sasha would be interesting, if they met. I get the feeling they'd either hate each other or be best friends.

 

[Deleted member #3060679]

I think I prefer Elena over D

also D looks way better without makeup(like when bathing or sleeping) then she does with makeup