- Dec 30, 2017
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The story could have ended for the D-only path.Two chapters ago D was just beginning the path to becoming a model, so there is no way, story wise that it could have ended back then. Chapter three was all about working her way to the competition, which she lost due to Tyra cheating, and chapter four is building to her redemption, Tyras downfall And hopefully, D's mother getting gang raped by a pack of angry Taco Bell chihuahuas.
They said way back during chapter two that there would be four chapters to the story, so the people whining were warned a long time ago.
The story was complete, D and F were finally together. They escaped Rachel and were starting a new life. Everything that happened after that was superfluous to that story.
For the fans of D growing as an independent person and changing from the sheltered little girl nto a mature sexually active young woman the story actually starts at the end of Chapter 2.