I believe Hrz wrote those. I did put forth the idea of moving D’s sex dialogue and thoughts from “am I doing this right” to “what do you like, Dad” to “it gets you excited when I do this.” It was nice to see that progression in this release from BJ1 in the hotel - to BJ2 in the train - to BJ3.
Also note how she is trying to relax her throat - foreshadowing.
As for time with D’s breasts, I put forth a detailed idea piece where F just focuses on the breasts. Not only would it fit sexually, but it would be a nice return to an area she’s always felt self conscious about and let F/D revel in them for a sexual episode.
thanks for reply
again,nice bits of writing there,it's great to see D starting to behave like that,she really starts to raise sexual tensions even more and it's nice to see that from her.
good to hear you have everything planned out regarding D's breasts,like the idea of the focus on her breasts,that's where those boobs points come into play i presume?
i know F is trying to make D feel good going nice and slowly this early into their relationship regarding her body and sexual pleasures but once they start to lust for eachother more,like what we saw in this update,i'd love to see him go bananas about her boobs,kinda like Manuel Ferrara does :closedeyesmile: