I felt that v0.15's dialogue were abit rushed. Mostly around the later half of this episode. It really becomes transparent around the hotel-scene: D wants to massage F, and the text is litterly d "Now it's my turn!" -> d "So... how was I?". Feels sloopy and rushed. Even worse when F helps D with her problem she can't do alone. She's quick at submitting to like laying down and moving her legs apart (her rushing shows the physical frustrations she had while being away from F, cute), but when it gets down to the action, it's over in a matter of 10 clicks or so.
Start -> 2 lines of dialogue -> Faster -> Faster -> 1 line -> add finger -> 2 lines -> Faster -> Faster -> 1 line -> end.
Very anticlimactic. Where is all the dialogue / inner dialogue while all this is happening. It felt so thin, and it is one of those moment that pushes the main theme, of how far D is willing to go. Comparing it to earlier D-limit-pushing encounters, it feels so weak and not up to the standard of all other DMD releases.
Got many more scenes I could point out where it feels rushed. Can't seem to just glance over them, as this feels like an entire different game than before.
What do you guys/gals think of this ?!