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Worse AVN I've played with the written text completely not synching with what's actually shown on the renders. The MC is described as having "rippling muscles", uh-huh, where? The very first scene, in the throne room, the text is both women are jacking the MC off and yet only ONE of them even had a hand on him.
It's like someone else wrote the story and someone else did the renders, and neither talked to each other to actually mesh up between the two. Never made it past part way through the throne scene because the writing was just so, so bad.
The writer needs to go back to writing fanfic because they are worse than one of those self-published authors. Most cringe dialogue I have seen in an AVN, and I used to read romance novels back in the day for laughs during summer break.
It's like someone else wrote the story and someone else did the renders, and neither talked to each other to actually mesh up between the two. Never made it past part way through the throne scene because the writing was just so, so bad.
The writer needs to go back to writing fanfic because they are worse than one of those self-published authors. Most cringe dialogue I have seen in an AVN, and I used to read romance novels back in the day for laughs during summer break.
I think this is prbbly the game that had one of the best catch to it yk, dragons, yeah just dragons lol.
Base idea is goated and super original for an AVN (well apart from the part where only girls can ride dragons that's a bit lame since you can't have no bromance lol).
The front img for once was rly good. Like I can't say how many games don't have the front image they deserve. The front img is rly important as it's the 1st thing you see when you are on the latest updates page. Idk for you but the name and front img of a game are what'll interest me.
This game rly had it all to begin with. However the horrible way the story is told, the pace, the frkin inexistant and weird transition from a scene to another, the chronology, the useless animations (let's be real it's be better to have some good renders than this quality for the animations), Mc's monologues (it's a frkin Vn not a book he doesn't need to describe EVERYTHING), the choices, like wth, they don't make sense.
Ik I may seem harsh but dev/s, I think you rly need to know abt it.
I'd advise to try playing some other games to get a feel of things.
Here are some recommendationsorganized from long to short approximately idk how long some of them actually are.
I only recommended games that could be similar in term of genres (honestly every single game in that list is goated or has the potential to be) :
Superhuman : long, epic fight scenes, goates stories and mysteries plus super original forn an AVN
Desert Stalker : long, no up to date but it's rly goated
Eternum : long, not up to date so can't tell you much abt it apart that it's goated
Mad world : mid, got some epic fight scenes, 1st AVN I see with 3d fight scenes that looks this badass
New antioch : short-mid, new game wth a real potent potnetial lol but it's rly well made the choices are clear and the interface is beautiful
THX
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What are you saying here? I can barely red this. I understand that you want mid-evil language but please make it so players can understand it. Are you trying to say Consumed by the Chaos? That m is confusing.
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I didn't know others heard of them. I wish they would make a movie or animated series based from the books. They are my favorite. I haven't read many books but what i did read i was amazed.
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Daughters of the Dragon v0.187 is available on Patreon:
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New release here, guys:
Changelog:
Images / Animations: 1100+
Words in dialogues: 28000+
Choices included: 60+
Achievements to unlock: 175+
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Changelog:
Images / Animations: 1100+
Words in dialogues: 28000+
Choices included: 60+
Achievements to unlock: 175+
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I have the cover of All the Weyrs of Pern tattooed on my back. The final book of the Dragonrider series.
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Was a good series. One of the first that I recall that pretty much had a poly/NTR type relationship model though where the queen riders pretty much fucked whoever rode the dragon that bred their mount. Didn't seem like they had much lasting connection to each other relationship wise, or if they did they shrugged it off pretty quick if a different dragon 'won' the breeding flight.
I never caught the last books of the series after the one's that went back to the founding and the dolphins. I assume they found some way in the end to stop the thread threat using the old tech that was available but maybe not.
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Not sure why you quoted me here but I have already played all the games you mention, but even games with less of a story are better than this POS rambling mess.
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Fucking lord, another one of those?
Hard pass in that case, thanks for the info.
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Yeah, the books stress that the dragonriders' way of life is very different from (and would be unacceptable by) the standards of the surrounding, pre-modern society because rider and dragon are so wrapped up in each other: The rider will feel the same ungovernable lust as their dragon during a flight. Several of the books deal with how that can intersect with romantic love and emotional relationships, with both positive and negative examples.
McCaffrey deserves a lot of credit for widening the scope of what sci-fi could be back in the day, writing female and male characters with equal agency and coupling elements of fantasy romance with more 'hard' sci-fi tropes. But I may be drifting slightly from the topic of this thread.
That was some of the worst writing I have ever come across, I honestly think it was written by a 12 year old girl
