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arrete d'ecrire en francais frerot, ils peuvent te bannir
Pls teach them rules.
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I told you in one of my previews posts that SN and ID are not off his list of things necessary to spice shit up yet, and that's one of the reasons why I won't support this guy again till he proves to us his word actually means something.

It wouldn't make sense for Daval to keep all those other idiots in his stories, especially in SN, where Liam and Amanda have to deal with an insane mob boss to cover Liam's stupid dad's supposed debts. Personally, I'd go all John Kramer on his and his son's asses and ride off with my women into the sunset ASAP so I wouldn't be forced to constantly look over my shoulder for some lunatic wanting to shoot me, or rape the women in my family, or hell, even both. And Alexa's an already proven slut. If she risked her comfortable million-dollar life for a stupid fling, she'll risk her relationship with Liam for way less than that. I'm still surprised she ain't somehow connected to that mobster or blackmailed by him, cuz I could've sworn she was shady enough to serve him her sister and nephew on a silver platter.

Hope Daval won't change anything about her character in the next chapters, but I suspect she's gonna be the first of Liam's LIs to get the NTR treatment.:cautious:



Don't worry, I'm almost 100% sure the lil fucker Aaron will get a chance to fuck Sarah too, cuz some shit like this is to be expected from this mindless, 0 build up fuckery.

The thing that amuses me a lil is that Daval made David constantly neglect Sarah too, just like her impotent husband did, so he can claim that's her excuse for jumping on the old fag's dick, but that's bullshit, cuz it's perfectly clear to anyone who read the shit he now calls a story that Sarah lost at least a few functional brain cells and started acting like the usual CrazyDad3D dumb cumslut that belongs to the streets for no real reasons other than that cuck $$$.



The unspoken but hard to deny truth.(y)



We still have Daniel in ID, but I wouldn't exactly call it a shocking plot twist if we saw him get taken out of the picture to fuck some random slut like Sofia, while the other two creeps fuck Lana for the 'plot'. And let's not forget that Liam isn't safe from a 'plot-necessary' cucking in SN either, so let's see how shit unfolds and hope I'm wrong about these two scenarios.
Immoral desires is the only reason i used to subscribe daval. I LIKE lana soo soo much.
If anybody knows what model daval has used in her?pls tell.I would be thankful from my heart.
SN was at peak when aunt and amanda threesome was there.
Now just romantic shit is going on there.
I always oppose VIP comic with children playing with teachers.. with no storyline.
And no comments on MT:) The work of Great Peter.
 

AnonLeague69

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What follows is that they both go to bathe and walk down the hallway without clothes. What a stupid story, Daval says that Mt was repetitive, well now another sex scene in the bathroom like ID 4

Surely one of her pimps was a bathroom cleaner and is paying her to have all the scenes in bathrooms (the bathroom at her house, a public bathroom, her friend's bathroom).
Hey kinda agree with you on that bro. And even the dialogues are a bit stupid. Like for example Daniel is trying think of plan to fuck her inside a bathroom where everything is coastal clear. No one literally is there. He already fucked her in a public bathroom room & in home bathroom why need of a plan now.. !?? :FacePalm: I sometimes feel like the first 3 chapters were written by someone else & now it's a different guy. I think daval should hire a writer since he's making alot of money atleast invest on something that will make your work even better not just graphically but also story wise & dialogues too.
 

SevenCostanza

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Hey kinda agree with you on that bro. And even the dialogues are a bit stupid. Like for example Daniel is trying think of plan to fuck her inside a bathroom where everything is coastal clear. No one literally is there. He already fucked her in a public bathroom room & in home bathroom why need of a plan now.. !?? :FacePalm: I sometimes feel like the first 3 chapters were written by someone else & now it's a different guy. I think daval should hire a writer since he's making alot of money atleast invest on something that will make your work even better not just graphically but also story wise & dialogues too.
Dialogue and plot/story was never his strong suit. Every comic basically starts the same with the reluctant party being seduced/corrupted and from there he has no idea what to do with it. I doubt he'll invest in a writer since the way it is now he's basically being paid to have others write for him. I don't think it's the best move in the long term but he's making his money so what can you do I guess.
 

xXwankerXx

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2 old friends of Peter are invited for lunch.......
As long as Sarah's there too, the old fart trio won't be having anything but dessert for that damn lunch they're invited to, if you know what I mean.;)

MT is boring but this is not, again a sex scene with Lana refusing to admit she enjoys it with guilt dialogue, for the 99th time, just to spread her legs again the time just after
Have to agree. Lana needs to get her shit together and accept the fact that she loves Daniel way more than a fictional mom should love her son and is crazy about his big dick, anything else is just boring details to stretch out the story or till we get to the part where he finally fucks her in the ass too, cuz a woman with an ass like hers needs a lot of anal action.:sneaky:

Dialogue and plot/story was never his strong suit. Every comic basically starts the same with the reluctant party being seduced/corrupted and from there he has no idea what to do with it. I doubt he'll invest in a writer since the way it is now he's basically being paid to have others write for him.
Yep. Storytelling was never Daval's strong suit. His ridiculously attractive women and high-quality renders are the only things that made him so popular in this business. 'Course we can argue here that his stories, especially the seduction part, have improved a lot compared to when he released the first chapters of SN, ID and MT, but MT was anything but boring till Ch4, bcz we never even got close to seeing the part where David seduces and fucks his sweet, nagging sis Alice.

It's sad to see a very talented artist like him pulling cheap, disrespectful stunts like the ones in Madness Together, but money always talks, I guess, and when the opportunity to make the big buck basically falls into their lap, every person reacts to it in their own way.

Even tho they're pretty predictable and nothing much happens when it comes to action, plot twists and/or dangerous situations to really spice things up, the sex scenes are still very good... thankfully, Daval's not slacking off on that front, but the threat of having NTR in SN and ID doesn't make me too optimistic about the future of these two porn comics.
 
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