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Bahamut Zero

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This chapter #4 of Together is very disappointing.

There was so much possibility to change the course of the story.
For example, introducing David's mother to us.

"Daval has once again proven his taste for fetishism and vulgarity."
I would change this sentence to:
Daval has once again proven his taste for $/€ and Peter81.

Because till now we see that Daval can write really hot and awesome story. the problem are, that this peter81, most probabili or pay so many money that we do not understand, or perhaps this peter81 is Deval boyfriend/girlfriend? Anyway someone that he cant say no. Most probabily someone that you cant say no.
Because otherwise i do not understand why ruin three chapter for one chapter? Because i wanna understand what mean this:

Just a little part of the story? What mean a little? You ruin a good story for little part?
 

Kurimuzon

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I would change this sentence to:
Daval has once again proven his taste for $/€ and Peter81.

Because till now we see that Daval can write really hot and awesome story. the problem are, that this peter81, most probabili or pay so many money that we do not understand, or perhaps this peter81 is Deval boyfriend/girlfriend? Anyway someone that he cant say no. Most probabily someone that you cant say no.
Because otherwise i do not understand why ruin three chapter for one chapter? Because i wanna understand what mean this:
Yeah, until now Daval has proved to be more than capable to do good comics, ID and SN are the proof, ID especially.

If MT4 was a stand alone comics or he was the MC from the start of MT, there wouldn’t be any problems, people where aware, but forcing this character in the main story is just so stupid

I will never understand this kind ntr… so humiliating for the MC, even in other comics…
 
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PRTech

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Yeah, until now Daval has proved to be more than capable to do good comics, ID and SN are the proof, ID especially.

If MT4 was a stand alone comics or he was the MC from the start of MT, there wouldn’t be any problems, people where aware, but forcing this character in the main story is just so stupid

I will never understand this kind ntr… so humiliating for the MC, even in other comics…
I'm worried that some of the SUBS are starting to recommend ideas for ID. One SUB practically wrote up an extensive story line on Discord.
 

Kurimuzon

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I'm worried that some of the SUBS are starting to recommend ideas for ID. One SUB practically wrote up an extensive story line on Discord.

Whit NTR on it? Others with Lana? His subs are all like that? No one complains for this choice there? Just curious at this point. Someone that doesn’t like this should write it too, they can’t ruin an artist entire catalogue
Just hope for Daval himself at this point
 

PRTech

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Whit NTR on it? Others with Lana? His subs are all like that? No one complains for this choice there? Just curious at this point. Someone that doesn’t like this should write it too, they can’t ruin an artist entire catalogue
Just hope for Daval himself at this point
No NTR, or other with Lana, BUT if a SUB has his own story they should create their own comic/game and not have DAVAL deviate from his story telling. I might have to start voicing my concerned all over again.
 

Dustellar

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If the suggestions are good, like Daniel having a threesome with Lana and Rosa or adding an aunt like in SN, it's totally fine to me... I know it sounds hypocritical but as someone else said, people tend to relate to the MC and even if there are women out there that could find Lana relatable and want her to fuck other people they are the minority, most fans and/or supporters are men! of course I prefer the focus to be Daniel and Lana but I wouldn't mind seeing her having fun with any of her friends in a future issue, as long Daniel join them.
 

Kurimuzon

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If the suggestions are good, like Daniel having a threesome with Lana and Rosa or adding an aunt like in SN, it's totally fine to me... I know it sounds hypocritical but as someone else said, people tend to relate to the MC and even if there are women out there that could find Lana relatable and want her to fuck other people they are the minority, most fans and/or supporters are men! of course I prefer the focus to be Daniel and Lana but I wouldn't mind seeing her having fun with any of her friends in a future issue, as long Daniel join them.
Yeah, people relate with MC it’s the base of almost every media, that’s why we keep reading/watching media in general
The NTR makes most of people angry for that reason

No NTR, or other with Lana, BUT if a SUB has his own story they should create their own comic/game and not have DAVAL deviate from his story telling. I might have to start voicing my concerned all over again.
That’s right too
 

PRTech

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If the suggestions are good, like Daniel having a threesome with Lana and Rosa or adding an aunt like in SN, it's totally fine to me... I know it sounds hypocritical but as someone else said, people tend to relate to the MC and even if there are women out there that could find Lana relatable and want her to fuck other people they are the minority, most fans and/or supporters are men! of course I prefer the focus to be Daniel and Lana but I wouldn't mind seeing her having fun with any of her friends in a future issue, as long Daniel join them.
As long its from DAVAL own writing, I support him (GOLD VIP) for his story and not the stories of other SUBS. Some of the suggestion can have major affect to how the story develop and ruin it.
 

Bahamut Zero

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If the suggestions are good, like Daniel having a threesome with Lana and Rosa or adding an aunt like in SN, it's totally fine to me... I know it sounds hypocritical but as someone else said, people tend to relate to the MC and even if there are women out there that could find Lana relatable and want her to fuck other people they are the minority, most fans and/or supporters are men! of course I prefer the focus to be Daniel and Lana but I wouldn't mind seeing her having fun with any of her friends in a future issue, as long Daniel join them.
As long its from DAVAL own writing, I support him (GOLD VIP) for his story and not the stories of other SUBS. Some of the suggestion can have major affect to how the story develop and ruin it.
It's the first time I've had to agree with both commandants.
Because I can understand both people. As long as the suggestions are to add a potential aunt and as long as Daniel is the only one who gets to fuck the women. It's more than fine with me. "But no other men". "No male friends". Its not a problem to put some friend for plot, but no pussy for them.

But I also agree with PRTech, Daval should be the one writing the stories. Once a story has been put on a specific track, it should arrive at its destination only on that track. The suggestions must be suggestions. The author can take inspiration and consequently create the story. But he should neither let himself be influenced too much nor allow another user to write a chapter.

Daval is losing contact with reality, the comic is no longer his at this point, I wouldn't know how to judge an author who has another write his book. No self-respecting author, he concludes, would partially write the story of another. Inspiration, suggestions are one thing, but they also need to be well written and not go off track.

For example Daniel/Lana/Rose can be a good start for a future chapter, but later. When Lana finally start to accept, Daniel love. When she finally desire Daniel more then her husband, when she finally is one things with Daniel, then Rose can see them make love and Daniel could discover Rose and then could plan a threesome. But first i wanna see Daniel find a way to get ride of his father. Because let's be clear, in the end the father isn't even bad, he doesn't even deserve to suffer all this. So if I were in Daval, at some point, I would have Daniel plan something and have his father cheat on his mother with someone else. Record everything with a camera and then show everything to his mother. That hypocritically, she would ask for a divorce. At that point Deval can make any threesome. Also he can add an aunt, who would arrive precisely because of the divorce to understand what happened and from there, Daniel would start to corrupt her too
 

Terror77

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the beginning of the end
MT4.jpeg
just a handjob.
I had problems with the Together update because I still didn't have written what was going to happen so it took me a long time to choose the images I would do.
The latest ID update will be much easier to do since I have written the description of each page 2 weeks ago.

I will post both updates when I wake up.
Together first and ID hours later.
Together pages are already done but I will write the dialogs when I wake up.
thanks for the support.


¿He had problems because he didn't have the dialogues written or is he waiting for Peter to pass them on to him?
 
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Kurimuzon

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the beginning of the end
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just a handjob.
I had problems with the Together update because I still didn't have written what was going to happen so it took me a long time to choose the images I would do.
The latest ID update will be much easier to do since I have written the description of each page 2 weeks ago.

I will post both updates when I wake up.
Together first and ID hours later.
Together pages are already done but I will write the dialogs when I wake up.
thanks for the support.


He had problems because he didn't have the dialogues written or is he waiting for Peter to pass them on to him?
Was just matter of time.... So bad....
What people are saying in the comments? if everyone agrees, it will never change course again. It's really the end of this comics, not just this chapter
At this point, the vote of Gold Vip is meaningless
 
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Bahamut Zero

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Unfortunately, it is true that a person's dignity can be sold very easily with money. Deval deeply disappointed me. And I don't understand why his VIP members haven't sued Deval yet. Because they can eh. He is the one who dictated the law that VIP members can make their word count, given that they pay and given that he also did a survey on what they wanted. The majority had voted for No NTR. But he took peter81's words as law, not caring who is paying him. By law, he had to do what the majority asked. Unfortunately, however, they will certainly remain silent (because is a porno comics and surelly there do not sued him because they will feel embarrassed). And no one will say anything. I would have already sued him for not having fulfilled what he wrote and asked for. And i would also have asked for this peter81 to be thrown out of the community he is ruining. This is all very sad indeed. How a person's dignity is trampled on by money.
 
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Kurimuzon

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Unfortunately, it is true that a person's dignity can be sold very easily with money. Deval deeply disappointed me. And I don't understand why his VIP members haven't sued Deval yet. Because they can eh. He is the one who dictated the law that VIP members can make their word count, given that they pay and given that he also did a survey on what they wanted. The majority had voted for No NTR. But he took peter81's words as law, not caring who is paying him. By law, he had to do what the majority asked. Unfortunately, however, they will certainly remain silent (because is a porno comics and surelly there do not sued him because they will feel embarrassed). And no one will say anything. I would have already sued him for not having fulfilled what he wrote and asked for. And i would also have asked for this peter81 to be thrown out of the community he is ruining. This is all very sad indeed. How a person's dignity is trampled on by money.
The solution was even simple.. just do a private commission, the uncle is even called Peter, it was a specific request for sure, It's not pleasant to read..
 

Bahamut Zero

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The solution was even simple.. just do a private commission, the uncle is even called Peter, it was a specific request for sure, It's not pleasant to read..
This was one of the alternatives. I just don't understand Daval. Why he's doing all this. why it is bending to this user, hurting the majority of its users? He could have created a new comic, a new line just for NTR lovers. And don't ruin his current work. And I don't understand why those who are supporting it aren't asking for a refund. Which he can do. It is written in the patreon rules, if a developer does not fulfill what his community or supporter requires, the latter asks him for a refund. And get repaid for all the money invested in him. Since Deval is going against the majority. Why don't they wake up? I'm sorry to see such an excellent artist ruin his reputation like this.
 

Dustellar

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The kiss is coming? don't get me wrong, is the thing I expect the most, but here? not romantic enough! but I totally understand... it's the little push she needs, knowing he will not stop until she kiss him.
 

Bahamut Zero

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ID5 90-119
Another nice gift from the neighbors over at 8muses. Namely........GokuVergudoFollador. You can spend hours figuring out the meaning of his name or just enjoy his philanthropy :p :p :cool::cool:.
Sorry to ask but you write 90-119, but in reality is 90-120*? Because i see that you use two time 103, but the second time is 103a. So that mean that 103a is 104? So we need to rename all the other images, because the number is 120? Or i am missing something?

Thank you
 

Bob Jewl

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It's disgusting, now if I say goodbye to this thread, what shitty content is coming, I won't waste my money or my energy on this shit, even if many subscribers tell daval that we don't like the direction MT4 is taking. He doesn't seem to care, I hope he cares when he has less money and less dissemination of his content.



He is so obsessed with NTR, just look at a picture of his VIP comic from October.
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People who like NTR so much, why don't they go and give their girlfriend to a stranger and fulfill their fantasy? It would be too easy and they stop screwing up games and comics where there weren't any.
What is this from?
 
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It's funny to see everyone taking so personal adding an old character or NTR,
calling it disgusting and kink shaming NTR enjoyers, the death of daval3d, etc.

Meanwhile,those same guys jack off to Incest and grown women having sex with clearly underage characters, what a bunch of weird hypocrites.

Now report this message cause u cant handle the truth.
Exactly!!!
 
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