I see a lot of people angry about the ending of ID9 both on boosty subscriberstar and forums like this one, I ask you, didn't you notice before? In ID, for 9 chapters, Lana's acceptance of Daniel was prolonged and now it will be shown in the most anticipated moment in a fucking flashback lol, Daval put Peter in MT out of nowhere, then in SN he wanted to put NTR in with the bullies that Amanda's husband owes money to, do you remember the monsters that appear at the end of chapter 8? he screwed up again by putting silvia the innocent alice without any sexual act he eats the pussy of a fat girl in the bathroom where he works, daval is very imbecile and lazy remember recently the nerve of saying despite being late with the udpates he put it's match day RM vs AT daval doesn't know how to tell stories because he bases himself on what his subscribers want who suck his cock on discord or pay him extra money outside.
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Daval's problem is that he can't keep two sectors happy and even more so with this shit. The people who maybe wanted Sharon instead of Sofia were screwed, because this is a one-time event according to Daval. Besides, we are not even sure that they will fuck Sofia, because she only said that she wanted someone to know the secret.
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ok. but we dont follow the worldI said end of story but I cant help myself and need to answer to that just for the sake of love for football- allow me to enlighten you
FIFA!!!!???? Your football and our exsisted way before FIFA!!! Again you are ignoring the fact that American football evolved from Rugby football, and Rugby football existed before your football and ours. I dont get why so many europeans get sooo bent out of shape over this??I said end of story but I cant help myself and need to answer to that just for the sake of love for football
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I agree with you, Daval knows how to start a story and turn us on until our dick is really hard, but as the story progresses he listens to his subscribers who suck his dick until it's really dry and he shits, and the proof is SN and MT, these two stories were going so well until he himself screwed up.
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Sorry if I don't trust Daval when he says that this will be a "one time thing", when there are a lot of hints that Sharon may find out too, there were literally only two people suspecting, one was Sofia, the other Sharon... I already expect by issues 15 Daval saying "I wanted someone from the family to find out, but it will be one-time thing"
Anyway, I can't wait to see how Daniel and Lana solve this problem, I still think blackmail can't work because they have more to lose, plus they have no physical proof that Sofia cheated, and neither does Sofia, she wasn't smart enough to record them... people are jumping to too many conclusions, as I said before, maybe Sofia role will be of a moral support, now that Lana has a friend to talk about... or maybe there will be a threesome in issue 11, who knows! but I expect a cover with the three of them for issue 11.
Anyway, I can't wait to see how Daniel and Lana solve this problem, I still think blackmail can't work because they have more to lose, plus they have no physical proof that Sofia cheated, and neither does Sofia, she wasn't smart enough to record them... people are jumping to too many conclusions, as I said before, maybe Sofia role will be of a moral support, now that Lana has a friend to talk about... or maybe there will be a threesome in issue 11, who knows! but I expect a cover with the three of them for issue 11.
You are right we are just speculating. I was gonna happen next until actually happens. It’s a lot of guessing but at the same time one of us is gonna be right.
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I'm sure that Daval can always change his opnio, and he screwed up with this even more so when in his personal discord, with the paying members, he tells them that it's only once, that's because it is. Things aren't very sure but it was definitely a mistake to use Sofia instead of Sharon.
One thing is for sure Daval screwed up and very deeply. To some people who try to deny the obvious.
Let's see what your paying members think.
It seems there is not much happiness. It does not go from 0 to 100 in Hours. I fuck up.
Let's look at Jack Cy's comparison, I'm sure it's not that much of a difference... Ah... Well, the sun can't be covered with a finger.
One thing is for sure Daval screwed up and very deeply. To some people who try to deny the obvious.
Let's see what your paying members think.
It seems there is not much happiness. It does not go from 0 to 100 in Hours. I fuck up.
Let's look at Jack Cy's comparison, I'm sure it's not that much of a difference... Ah... Well, the sun can't be covered with a finger.
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Daval screwed up and now this is going to be the move that will make his money back, or is this Daval's downfall?
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Most of us know that he didn't make the right decision when he had to come out and show his face on Discord. But when he never explained things, something happened that he didn't expect and he had to come forward on Discord.
Also, it seems that in X before Twitter, the crowd is divided, that's why the boy came out to give explanations.
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Oct 02, 2024 06:16 am
Flashback stuff and other things
Some subscribers say that there is no time for there to be a long time scene. I'll explain what's going on.
Sofia wanted to enter Daniel's room but she notices that Lana is heading there. she was waiting for lana to get out, Sofia thought that lana visited Daniel but that she would get out quickly. sofia waited for wool exit for her to continue with his plans, but lana did not come out, about 30 minutes passed and nothing. (I missed adding "30 minutes later") when Sofia is in the hallway.
Sofia doesn't want to wait any longer and goes to Daniel's room. listen to the moans and discover the secret.
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He could have ended the issue with Lana entering the room calling for Daniel, then issue 10 could have been in the present instead of a flashback, that way we would not have to wait months to see the resolution of this cliffhanger, not to mention that Lana finally embracing the relationship would have been a great closure of her character development, before starting this new arc about Sofia learning the truth...
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Wow, more than one explanation and explanation in one day, this situation is just sad.
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Oct 02, 2024 06:29 am
ENDING OPTIONS AND MORE
On id8 and id9 I did little sex scenes. Lana and daniel in the room of daniel sex scene in the car, martha, in the locker rooms, when they return to the house of martha Lana and daniel fuck in the bathroom again.
the ending where "sofia discovered the secret" I had it planned for id8 and thus finish the Martha's house arc, but I delayed it to add more sex scenes until id9.
I had some options to finish id9
1) lana tells Daniel that she wants to fuck with him and in ID10 start with a long sex scene where at the end of the chapter sofia would discover her secret.
2) that at the end of id9 sofia discovered the secret to creating expectation, but that in id10 she started with a long sex scene showing the moments before Sofia comes.
Any of the alternatives sofia would discover the secret and that would start a stage where Daniel and Lana solve that problem together. that's my intention. I'm not going to add Sofia to the relationship, Sofia is not going to blackmail them for sex. I won't create orgies, Lana won't fuck Uncle Peter NO! NO! NO! none of that will happen and I have to explain that because some subs think I will do all those things.
Sofia will not start to be important to the plot, in fact she will not appear much more. that was my idea but some subs think that now Sofia will be the new protagonist.
This is my comic and I know it. also I want to remember that this comic has been going on for 2 years and I had to add something to the plot or lana and daniel would continue to secretly fuck together until id56. that would be boring.
ID10 will be an excellent chapter and its first update will be on the 5th. at the end of the chapter, the arch of Martha's house will be finished. ID11 will be interesting.
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Brothers, Daval didn't last two days with a position and they already made him change his mind. As I said, it is not normal for you to release update after update, and even more so when he did it in his personal discord, My boy Daval tried to measure the waters and the current took him away. In the end, Daniel and Lana WOW won.
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Darn, I've never seen Daval posting such a litany of apologism (except arguably on the Uncle Peter addition on MT) it's both sad and hilarious at the same time!
Well, let's see how'd he resolve this, and how credibly. It would add more interest and intrigue among his fanbase for sure.
Well, let's see how'd he resolve this, and how credibly. It would add more interest and intrigue among his fanbase for sure.
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Option 1 was literally the best option, now you have people that will not enjoy chapter 10 as much because they know that at the end Sofia will find out, he literally killed any hope and surprise factor by choosing option 2 xD I agree with something, Daniel and Lana secret sex for so many issues will make it boring, but wish he finished the "Lana embracing the relationship" arc before teasing the next one.
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Well then only the secret is revealed but the relationship remains monogamous between Daniel and Lana. In addition to seeing the way they come out. Daval is the best at saving the game and he doesn't even come in at half time.
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Daval testing the waters is a good theory, imagine him saving this last page for issue 10, he would have no time to change it for issue 11 in case people didn't like it, but now he has months to change everything and claim that "it was never part of the plan".
I insist, I agree with him about a few things, it was time to add something new, because Lana not accepting the relationship was one of the main focus of the comic but it lasted too long, the problem here is that the secret sex was another important part of it, Daval killed both in one page, should have done "Lana finally accepts the relationship/Sofia and Sharon become more suspicious of them > some issues of Lana and Daniel embracing in passionate sex >>>>> Sofia or Sharon find out", but instead did "Lana finally accepts the relationship/Sofía find out > a single issue of Lana and Daniel embracing in passionate sex > continuation of the cliffhanger"
I insist, I agree with him about a few things, it was time to add something new, because Lana not accepting the relationship was one of the main focus of the comic but it lasted too long, the problem here is that the secret sex was another important part of it, Daval killed both in one page, should have done "Lana finally accepts the relationship/Sofia and Sharon become more suspicious of them > some issues of Lana and Daniel embracing in passionate sex >>>>> Sofia or Sharon find out", but instead did "Lana finally accepts the relationship/Sofía find out > a single issue of Lana and Daniel embracing in passionate sex > continuation of the cliffhanger"