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mickeymcd30

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Don't worry. I don't have any intention of not finishing. And the reason it's been taking me so long, is that I often go back and see where I could've done things different or better. I'm neurotic that way. So there are times, I don't work on it at all because I figure the works are already translated. The comic merely bears the luxury of less censorship. Even though it's taken a while, I still find time here and there to do some editing on the work.

And I would love to get into contact with Daval3D and give him what I feel, in my opinion, are pointers on how to improve the dialogue. I would even do it for free, at this point.
Do you have a Discord account. I'm one of his friend. I maybe able to persuade him to contact you for improving his comic dialogues. Are you ok with it, just in case?
 
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Do you have a Discord account. I'm one of his friend. I maybe able to persuade him to contact you for improving his comic dialogues. Are you ok with it, just in case?
I haven't logged into discord in a while, but I go by the name 22TB on discord. I'll have to see if I remember my login.
 
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mickeymcd30

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I think after this foursome in SN story, Daval should focus more again the story between Liam and Amanda (with sideline sex scene or story with Alexa). I think by doing this, the story will go back to its glory days like we saw on chapter 1-6.
 
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Sofia will get some love only if that's what Lana wants, but Lana is clearly of the jealous type so that may never happen, Daval already wasted (or rather, skipped) the chance to make Daniel fuck Sofia or Martha, the perfect moment was when Lana tried to get back to her husband, Daniel was angry, he literally told his mom that if she was going to have fun with his dad, then he would have fun on his own too... of course mostly to make Lana jealous, but imagine if Lana said no and they never fuck again, Daniel is a young good looking guy, if he wanted he could have fucked a lot of girls, he just doesn't want that because of his obsession with his mom.
 

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Sofia will get some love only if that's what Lana wants, but Lana is clearly of the jealous type so that may never happen, Daval already wasted (or rather, skipped) the chance to make Daniel fuck Sofia or Martha, the perfect moment was when Lana tried to get back to her husband, Daniel was angry, he literally told his mom that if she was going to have fun with his dad, then he would have fun on his own too... of course mostly to make Lana jealous, but imagine if Lana said no and they never fuck again, Daniel is a young good looking guy, if he wanted he could have fucked a lot of girls, he just doesn't want that because of his obsession with his mom.
I think Sofia is going to end up masturbating in a chair watching how Lana does it with her son, that's the only thing Sofia is going to get from that relationship, for now.
 

8TB

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I didn't do anything yesterday all was working fine now today I login and no img is showing
Well, it's not the site, since I'm able to see the images just fine. So, it's either your browser or your device. Conduct a control experiment, and see if you're able to login and view the images first with a different browser, and (if that fails,) a different device.
 
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