Well, we plan on doing it for the long run so you'll have plenty of time (and updates) to play our games.
Glad you like the art
Just run a play test and it looks promising. I like the art. Storytelling seems to be good too. A general goal might be good for the story. There only were light technical issues at the second h-scene (porn mag) where the first dialogue was displayed without showing characters...
+ good base map with different locations
+ Karma system with choices
+ graphics
+ story / characters
- grindy feeling for the job for now (skills, options, etc??)
# I would like to see different text/name colours for different characters, so dialogues are better readable (with these voices in your head)
# different day times seem to be a good idea, seeing how much space and options actually exist in the house
# that teacher better replaces that red cross
# some kind of visualisation of your karma would be nice when it shall be an important game mechanic
# hint system for quests (and karma, maybe based on skills or relationship points (otherwise there will just be an endless cycle of saving before each possible h-scene...)
# h-scene with pornmags felt a little rushed... I don't mind hiding text to show a new graphic (boner) - it adds focus and depth
# speaking of that h-scene: as good as the idea was, that shirt is way to short be stucked somewhere... and i dont get how she loses it at the end together with her bra
# speaking of the other h-scene: I would have liked a little lower view after crouching close
### with these artistic skills hopefully that house and the map will be redrawn to match the art style in a way
Keep going!! Looks good!!
