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Don't download this placeholder, just wait 2-3 months and then give it a try there is ZERO content in this game right now!
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Peeping doesn't cause a game over, having the MC shove his face into her crotch does. If you pick NO you still get caught peeping, though the interaction is much more playful
Not if you pick Evil as your alignment. You literally get "Go Closer", "Do Nothing". At which point the game instantly assumes that Evil = Stupid and shoves your face in her crotch. You're railroaded because as i've already stated the dev thinks Evil = Stupid. Neutral or good you get the choice to Go Closer and then Stop, but heaven forbid you start off evil, you're beyond redeeming at that point.
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i DUNno .. I rage quit after game booted me out after my first choice to DO SOMETHING!
Which path are you on? Good? BAaaAAAAD? NEutral?
In other news ...
This game has a lot of inconsistencies and the whole dialogue leaves no room for the players to actually make out what it is they are supposed to do in any given situation.
The problem with the 1ST game over is the fact that this
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actually good critique, will fix all these, thanks
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art looks good. Bobs Burger as background image and cute girls, seems interesting.
its fate will be decided with the moral thing.
Sometimes me and devs do not share the same concept of whats "evil".
(For example, making an "evil" route that simply makes the MC prostitute all the girls to other guys....thats not evil, thats giving the girls up to keep the leftovers for no god damn reason.)
We will see... ( ' -')
edit: reading comments, the evil route seems already on a pretty bumpy start X_x
its fate will be decided with the moral thing.
Sometimes me and devs do not share the same concept of whats "evil".
(For example, making an "evil" route that simply makes the MC prostitute all the girls to other guys....thats not evil, thats giving the girls up to keep the leftovers for no god damn reason.)
We will see... ( ' -')
edit: reading comments, the evil route seems already on a pretty bumpy start X_x
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Clicked through everything and there is absolutely no content. If there is no content then please for the love of god state that somewhere on the first post.
Sorry to disappoint. There is just two small scenes with the "roommate" as of right now, I took this 0.01 to make it more of an introduction for all the characters. You shall start seeing more action from 0.02 onwards.
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Maybe you should stop referring to them as relatives. Patreon doesnt like that.
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Ooh so the mistake was choosing "evil" at the start? I was wondering why the mc was a dumbass lol
Would also be wise to enable skip while holding control, while some of us like reading text, others don't, especially in long winded situations or just scenes that have no importance.actually good critique, will fix all these, thanks
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O.K. .. so ... while the cat's out and about the 2 pics where a gal is on top of MC and his pinnacle is rising ... I had gone to the lybrary before talking with the teacher and the girl there says to me she's got nothing. As I understand, Librarians are the ones that have to be welcoming and ask about the public needs, not stans there acting all precious and snarky being bothered by the world.
So I would suggest making some response like "What ever Dude" ... because MC literally has nothing written in there unless you talk to the teacher 1st, which is a literal gauntlet because all doors are highlighted and nobody is guiding you anywhere.
Then after I talk to the teach and get the books, When I click on the black board it says how dumb MC might look. What is MC supposed to do? Skip classes while he reads till his eyes bleed on some random books the teacher told him to grab? You could make it an assignment, like in real universities, where teachers tell students what the paper is about, when the paper is due and then students can skip classes all they like, as long as they get the books, study on their own time and write the paper and turn it in in due time. That dynamic would actually work in MCs favor as he needs to work to get money for the chocolates (those are useless at the moment because for what ever reason the long lost childhood read head keeps fumbling MCs tries at being decent and actually putting in the charm to get to know people around him).
Then I went to put in the work and then when I selected the top right bedroom icon the map got frozen whilst the dialogue went on about catching your room mate rummaging through your stuff, then the argument, then the entanglement, I MISSED THE WHOLE STEAMY CONUNDRUM AS DIALOGUE WAS PLAYING, TEXT BOXES WERE CHANGING BUT NO RENDERS WERE RUNNING ON SCREEN TO ILLUSTRATE THE HAPPY SCENE.
Game oN!
So I would suggest making some response like "What ever Dude" ... because MC literally has nothing written in there unless you talk to the teacher 1st, which is a literal gauntlet because all doors are highlighted and nobody is guiding you anywhere.
Then after I talk to the teach and get the books, When I click on the black board it says how dumb MC might look. What is MC supposed to do? Skip classes while he reads till his eyes bleed on some random books the teacher told him to grab? You could make it an assignment, like in real universities, where teachers tell students what the paper is about, when the paper is due and then students can skip classes all they like, as long as they get the books, study on their own time and write the paper and turn it in in due time. That dynamic would actually work in MCs favor as he needs to work to get money for the chocolates (those are useless at the moment because for what ever reason the long lost childhood read head keeps fumbling MCs tries at being decent and actually putting in the charm to get to know people around him).
Then I went to put in the work and then when I selected the top right bedroom icon the map got frozen whilst the dialogue went on about catching your room mate rummaging through your stuff, then the argument, then the entanglement, I MISSED THE WHOLE STEAMY CONUNDRUM AS DIALOGUE WAS PLAYING, TEXT BOXES WERE CHANGING BUT NO RENDERS WERE RUNNING ON SCREEN TO ILLUSTRATE THE HAPPY SCENE.
Check out those issues .. maybe improve or change the triggers so that players get to see the cut scenes.
Game oN!
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I like your way of thinking. I'll look forward to play it when it will have consistent content.
Small things that need fixing.
The porn mag trigger acted oddly.
The MC was in the school, I clicked the bed icon, because I wanted to know what things did, this started the porn mag scene. However the MC stayed in the school and the images didn't show, this was on the Evil path.
The ability to fast forward through previously seen text and images. When characters are repeating the same thing but there is a slow click through, it irritates players.
The relationship images lack noses, plus it seems like they are all the same head in that.
The font, a fun font can be nice, but when a font uses capitals and lowercase interchangeably it makes things hard to read.
The text needs a good once over, I suggest grammarly or something similar.
Doors should be marked after the player finds out what is behind them.
The MC's door not being centered.
The hallway on the right after just entering the house does nothing.
Icons covering top of screen
Sounds are loud at full volume, same with music. As an aside the music is fine, but very repetitive, maybe try it fading out for a bit then come back after a while to keep people from getting sick of it.
The porn mag trigger acted oddly.
The MC was in the school, I clicked the bed icon, because I wanted to know what things did, this started the porn mag scene. However the MC stayed in the school and the images didn't show, this was on the Evil path.
The ability to fast forward through previously seen text and images. When characters are repeating the same thing but there is a slow click through, it irritates players.
The relationship images lack noses, plus it seems like they are all the same head in that.
The font, a fun font can be nice, but when a font uses capitals and lowercase interchangeably it makes things hard to read.
The text needs a good once over, I suggest grammarly or something similar.
Doors should be marked after the player finds out what is behind them.
The MC's door not being centered.
The hallway on the right after just entering the house does nothing.
Icons covering top of screen
Sounds are loud at full volume, same with music. As an aside the music is fine, but very repetitive, maybe try it fading out for a bit then come back after a while to keep people from getting sick of it.