I like your render, but Daz seems to have some problems with doing redhead freckles and it makes them look like raised bumps as a skin condition or cancer, that is one thing you may want to take into account to see if they do a 3D effect.
Trying out a fun concept. So i know the render quality is very poor. But testing out a concept. I kinda like it. Hope you do.
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Now thinking on how i can turn this concept into something more fun and higher in quality. (suggestions are always welcome).
The conceptualization looks like it came out fine, I like how you can still sort of see the color difference of the clothes that would be in the way, certain portions should probably have a bit more, like bra for breasts and panties.
I think the only game that does a similar concept right now is Glassix. Still well done.