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Played around with Depth of field. Might be a bit blurry...
- Dec 19, 2018
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Please critique these renders for me. As I am just learning to use Daz.
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An apple for your favourite teacher maybe?
- Feb 19, 2019
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What an incredible pair of boobs i can see here ... I'll become immediately blind ,I'm afraid ....
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Alot better then the first few renders i made and never showed to anybody.
On the first pic you have some clipping with the left end of the dress. Could probally be fixed by rotating the leg slightly or running Fit control and playing with the sliders.
On the second one the index finger on her left hand is clipping into the ground. Also some poses doesnt work for ceartin bodyshapes. The place where her her thigh and hip meets look unatural.
- Dec 19, 2018
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I totally did not see the finger on the 2nd, Thank you. Now about the hip/thigh Stupid me posed her myself and screwed it up lol.
I forgot to mention the dress clipping, I did that before I found out about Fit Control. I will redo those with what you have said. Thank you Again.
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Np, happy to help. Ive only been doing this for about 3 months myself so still learning aswell. I just get really annoyed by clipping to the point where i spend way too much time obsessing over it on my own renders.
I'm a newb as well..
From my point of view her breast is too large.. I would shrink those melons a bit.. at least with 25% maybe 50% or somewhere between. I like big boobs, mostly we all do.. maybe some weirdos around here.. anyway.. having those big melons I would say she should have a bigger body as well to hold those.. and probably it wouln't stay that round and perfect even then.. she seems to have some natural boobs and around 30 years old or more.. I don't know.. for me it's unrealistic either way.
The nipples again.. something is wrong there..
In my view those big melons should look something like this Ava Addams ones..
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Her eyesight.. is she looking to the far (her) right or only slightly? click on the girl on the scene and then on the parameters tab - at Pose Controls you can move both eyes at the same time "eyes side-side" or cross, close, up-down..but first reset them to 0.
Same on parameters - pose controls for example.. if you type "eyes" on the search tab you'll get only the option for her eyes.. sometimes it won't work because it's a setting for only one eye so you have to search for eye.. not eyes.. this is just an example. It's quite handy.. so you don't have to scroll all the way arround.
On her left hand I would bend it a bit more like almost paralel with the ground and then move down her arm to the ground.. it's a bit more tricky because in most of the cases her hand would be on the ground but her fingers not or would clip with the object/ground.. or it's not a flat.. so you ll have to bend her fingers too.. sometimes like like all 3 bones depending by the object.. in your positions that ground touch looks a bit gay..
One thing I do sometimes (when I'm not lazy) I'm checking the character like 360 to make sure nothing it's clipping at all.. even if it's not visibile on the camera but why not.. I'm pretty sure her toes or feet are clipping a bit.. or maybe I'm wrong..
Oh.. one thing I learned my self.. don't start to work with big boobs.. yeah she may look sexy or whatever but in many poses you'll have problems with them.. like clipping with the arm, clothes won't fit or it would look like shit.. if your characters is laying or leaning it would be lot of work there if the pose does not have the morph for the breast as well.. and at the end it would not look realistic.
The other one.. the light from her body does not match with the light from the enviroment.. and that for me it's the hardest thing in any renders or annoying.. I would preffer to work one day to make a pose from 0 rather than working with lights.. especially on a low end pc.
This is another chapter.. it's a long one.. there are quite a few long tutorials on youtube.. if you wanna learn that..
Or actually maybe I'm wrong in that because of the low resolution..
Anyway.. this was just me.. don't take me wrong.. don't wanna make you feel bad in any way.. you can take my words or not.. it's up to you.. we all are unique in some way or another.. maybe I don't like the huge, unrealistc boobs, maybe you dream at them all the time.. but at the end it's not an awful render.. i've seen worse sometimes in games uploaded here.. And now I'm having another problem.. tried to play a few games since I started my journey in DAZ and I'm seeing all the wrong shits, clips, clothes, ligths.. and I'm loosing the story.. anyway (again).. that's another subject.
Fuck sake.. this is a long post.. sry for that.
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- Dec 19, 2018
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I totally appreciate your feedback, thank you. I have some learning to do it seems.
the boobs are a bit wonky aren't they lol.on a side note, I asked for a critique, and you gave it. I am a firm believer that you don't pull punches or beat around the bush. (pun intended
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And maybe the best advice I recived here on f95 on my 1st day in DAZ.. is too look at pictures/movies and compare them whit what I have, camera angles or the way the character sits, how the hair is bended or not etc.. and I'm still not really learning from that.. at least on the camera angle.. but I'm getting there I think.
Found the post..
https://f95zone.to/threads/dating-my-daughter-fan-art.4315/page-109#post-2056776
I know he's right.. do you think I fixed that.. no.. a little because I'm greedy and I wan't to catch everything.. and I'm doing wrong.. I hope I'll learn this sometimes..
Found the post..
https://f95zone.to/threads/dating-my-daughter-fan-art.4315/page-109#post-2056776
I know he's right.. do you think I fixed that.. no.. a little because I'm greedy and I wan't to catch everything.. and I'm doing wrong.. I hope I'll learn this sometimes..
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Very new to Daz. My first scene, would appreciate some feedback. I do know that the background (environment map) is very meh and pixely, should've probably added some depth of field blur to make it look better.
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YEEEEEEEEES!!!
Teachers are the BEST!!
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Fit control my ass.. couldn't make it to work on that yellow top .
The blonde is too blury I think..
Is there any options to remove the eye reflections? rather than moving the light object or change the eyes set maybe..
This should be better but messing with clothes you fuck with the materials as well..
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and I'm sticking with this..
Her tank is bendig to the right a bit too much .. under breast.. can control the top but not the tank too.. both are in the same group..
Fucking hard to find something that match for girls.. easier for boys.. fucking t-shirt and some pants/jeans all done!
Still rendering this one..
V4
With the help from the guys around here.
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Haha I turned visibility of in viewpoint but forgot in render lol them balls have mind of their own ;p
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Is she sexy and old enough for a milf?