Actually I planned a Romance route, a Corruption route and another one, so yes there will be a "Nice guy" (Who will probably appears in the next chapter)
That's not how that works. You can criticize things while not being good at them yourself. I never understood that argument.If you're going to make comments bagging the quality of a developer's writing, you might want to first make sure your own writing is up to scratch.
That I will agree with. I hate bimbofication and stuff like that. If it's not optional I just stop playing.
Why do people make such a big deal about the writing, when it's so obvious the Dev's first language isn't English? If you had to write in their first language, could you do a better job?
I wasn't talking about his language skills, I was talking about his boring, souless shitty writing.
Create a Android port it'll help you to gather more downloads and audiance
Man i feel you, everytime i see the female protagonist tag im happy, then i see the main character with some bigass boobas out of reality. Every, single, time.So after reading through the last few pages of the forum, I'd like to thank you for the great start of the game.
Thank you and have fun developing
- I really love the art style. I even more love that we got a female protag that has normal sized breasts. (did you know, worldwide the average breast size is only a B?)
- The characters as of date are beautifully done
- I think your writing is fine. I don't see the problem with a error here or there and all that say otherwise are just very intolerant in my opinion.
- I think the use of AI's can be a big help. As a German speaking person, I often use chatGPT to translate. It's by far better than goggle or others.
PS: Don't forget: the biggest challenge lies always between keyboard and chair
Thanks for this, I corrected everything it will be fixed in the next update with the chapter 2.
