One of the important errors I found just from the main menu is there's no setting options for the sound, music, text, text box or anything. This should be the MOST IMPORTANT thing that needs to be fixed lol. No setting is a MAJOR red flag to avoid the game in my opinion. It shows the Dev either don't know what they are doing or they are just too lazy.
There is no need to be rude about it, the dev might be inexperienced when working with Renpy, but I would hardly call someone who made a VM with beautiful moving backgrounds, farming elements, fishing minigame, whatever the ventilation duct thing was as "lazy",the dev obviously cares about the project and we literally win nothing by trampling his motivation with shit criticism.
Anyways, I think I reached the end of content and I have some opinions.
* The renders are nice, the MC seems to be more on the young side, but I like he looks different from your average MC.
* I really liked the moving backgrounds the game is overall visually pleasing.
* The game could really use some settings options, I don't mind if for creative purposes you want to prevent people from just easily turning back time to cheat on the choices, but at least give us the chance to change the volume of the music and the sound effects.
* We kinda need some pointers to tell us when we reached a "end of content" for each mission because is hard to know when we are wasting our time or not (does Laura ever goes to the pool? does the social party in the comic store ever starts? I don't know if those events aren't programmed yet, or is a bug)
* I really liked the heavy themes this game touch, I also like how it makes fun of other typical VN plots. Keep it up!
* Btw the "eavesdrop thing" when you go to the different locations is a really cool feature.
* While is weird to have a game with little to no sex content, the suplot of the ginger girl flashing strangers is waaay too silly to make sense and I think is not needed.
Overall I think this game has potential, I see the passion the dev has for a good story, and I will follow the development with great interest.