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I like the concept, but the game is far too unplayable even at this stage, you should focus on making the game playable and get a start on those images if you want all this criticism to die down.
 
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Thundorn

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bad "improvement" in ui / save load/ menu.
If you can be more specific as to what you dislike, i am happy to engage

no choice in lot of dialogs, but you have to click every answer.
This is intentional. I understand it will not be to everyone's liking but such is life.

empty locations make the game feel like a construction site all the time. most devs hide this better, in more of a monthly progressing story.
this isnt a monthly progressing story, but I will take it under advisement not to add locations without content

cg quality is weak,
Cg is fine for now. Most people like it and once i have more support and can afford better hardware I will be able to improvie it.

men with tits and lipstick behind the next bush.
Not sure anyone wants to know what you think about when you are alone at night.
 

Thundorn

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any story progression (on both paths) or just technical improvements in this version?
There are some new scenes in this version but i wanted to use this version to introduce some new locations and set the foundation for the job system and deal with issues raised in the previous version.
 

Reficul

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The renders, designs, plot and contents are pretty much all fine in my mind but the base game is still very lacking.

Obviously the biggest flaw is the lack of stuff to do, but that should be fixed in future updates. The problem with the gameplay is that you will have to find out the time and place for events to occur, which might be a little annoying.
The UI could be polished with a good looking font and frame designs, but it's at least playable the way it is.

While I already said the plot was fine, I still would have liked to see a longer period of homelessness at the beginning, because that is a rarely used setting and could also have high potential for a porn game, even if the content is "innocent" in nature. Dirty and or ripped clothes, washing in the sea or a river and sharing body warmth at night. It could help the family deepening their bond until they actually find the motel.
Thundorn, my suggestion is you add a week or so before we actually meet the prostitute, during which the family has to survive on whatever money the can find or earn. It could also be used to actually introduce the characters better, especially the sister, who would then actually have a personality before getting sick.

But overall I like the setting and the premise and hope you won't abandon your project somewhere along the line.
 

arnel19702017

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There are some new scenes in this version but i wanted to use this version to introduce some new locations and set the foundation for the job system and deal with issues raised in the previous version.
cool, thank you, hope you get all the help you need for this project, really see potential in this one. hope we see lots of Mom/son "inter-action" in the future ;)
is it just me or did I see the BB mom at the mall talking to the girl at the music library? very cool :)
 

fyahrebel

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i honestly dont know wtf to do or is there just nothing to do...all ive done is clean pool eat with mom once sis was having a bad dream n 1 store in the mall but cant do anything. someone plz tell me
 

gromit43

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any one know how to play this games as all i am doing is cleaning the pool once a week and can't buy anything or do anything
 

Thundorn

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after sometime i went to the hospital wit sis den game crashed so idk
I wasnt aware of the crash after the hospital as it wasnt doing it in testing so will look into that. IThank you for mentioning it

any one know how to play this games as all i am doing is cleaning the pool once a week and can't buy anything or do anything
At the moment there isn't much else. v0.0.2 was mainly about putting down the framework for the story to be built around. Over the next two updates I will be implementing a whole new job system which will allow Jake to earn money much faster, as well as having mutliple choices as to what job he gets. Each job starts a career path which has a promotion ladder. In order to get promoted Jake must get certain stats dependent on the job. Naturally he can only have one job at a time since most of them would be during office hours. The jobs available to jake will also be dependent on his stats, reputation and how much the person who might offer him the job likes him.
There will also be several education options for both Jake, Sarah and Lucy, all of which will have some impact on the story.
 

Katgza

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Some "Events"

- Talking to a Friend at "Twins Pine Mall" [Back to the Future Reference][Big Brother & DMD Reference]
- Checking sister at Night. [Nightmare Scene]
- Peeking Mom at Bathroom while she showers.
- Taking Sister to the Pool.
- Taking Sister to the Hospital.
- Helping Mom Shower Sister at Bathroom. [Mom in a Bathing Suit & Sister Naked]
- Peeking Sister at Bathroom.
- Little Chat with mom while she works. [Maid Costume]
- Checking Sister while she exercises

Btw @Thundorn in which part of the game u use "asmr_1.mp3"?

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